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Free Souls- chapter 1
Chapter one: Woman in love
And now, she was nothing of what she'd been before.
Lilith kept her breath for a few, fast seconds- just a little fraction of time in which she couldn't even clearly understand what was happening around her, and she'd arrived back home. The portal she had crossed was gone already, and that familiar, clean arena completely disappeared.
It'd been hard leaving her own house several years ago, and it hadn't been easy leaving her own dimension, a few months earlier- now, coming back home hadn't been less painful than that old experiences. Her new home, the village of her old self, was just starting to recover after that terrible attack guided from the Illithid who'd been the Second for some time, even though the wounds of its citizens were still opened.
A lot of people had fallen during those painful hours, but hopefully her courage, along with her companions and friends Igor and Garrett's bravery, saved that village and mo
Free Souls- chapter 2
Chapter two: The farthest lights
Lilith stared at her arm feeling lost and nostalgic, thinking back to that distant reality in which she'd been the Fifth General, the reality that had been her identity for some months. Now, she wasn't the Fifth anymore.
The purple pearl necklace her drow mother gave her was also gone, so she wasn't a Vaen Sundu anymore, as well. That feeling struck her, it was such a refreshing realization for her mind!
But as soon as she discovered her necklace had disappeared, she started wondering the reason why her body was also shivering in the dark coldness of that night, and found out she was completely naked- in an unknown forest on a hill. The young half-drow stood sighing at her current outfit: seeing her bare skin like ashes under the delicate light of the moon made her feel weak and delicate. No dress, no armor made of leather or spider webs, no weapons, knives and swords either. She shook her head and silvery hair
Free Souls- chapter 3
Chapter three: Old friends
The Fourth General was a fierce, strong gnoll who had lost his own clan, initially too ferocious to live with anyone except for other animals and humanoid creatures like him; he met the Third General some years earlier, after avenging his old companions. Thanks to his company and help, Fafnir the Fourth finally started to show his lovely and friendly character.
They both met Lilith's old self and suffered from that loss, but loved her new identity, way more sweet and maternal than the previous one.
When rumors said a Doppelganger was pretending to be one of the Generals, aiming to kill the other ones to gain more power, Fafnir doubted of his best friend and tried to murder him- Lilith managed to stop his fury against her, but she knew he was still distrustful against Loa, the Third.
Unluckily he was lost during the fight against the Astral Terror- her group managed to escape unexpectedly,
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Perhaps she'd become too complacent in her bond with the elements. She'd been controlling the weather for as long as she could remember. Even when she they returned her to childhood, she felt the power of nature coursing through her veins. Ororo had always felt more of an affinity with some of her teammates than others, their powers aligning beautifully with her own. She'd worked well them in training and battle, had used her powers to enhance theirs when necessary to save lives.
Perhaps that's why it hurt so much when she felt the blood in her veins freezing, the liquid on which her life depended, the one which she could draw from the clouds or hold back at will, crystallizing. It was probably the fact that she'd felt his ice encasing her from the outside that made her aware it was him, even though something wasn't quite right about it. As his power worked its way slowly through her b
Re-CyclingMy heart lies deep within, buried
By the very beings whose life
I daily sustain.
When the rain comes, its cycle finished,
Their plates are full and their cups overflow
But they thank me not with words.
They thank me with tall buildings,
Metal erections that scrape against
My outstretched throat.
They thank me with jarring vibrations,
Causing the most deadly of waste
To fall in places unprepared for such toxins.
Their lands dry up, and plants cry out
Asking why their mother has forsaken them,
Not understanding my plight.
I have been trapped
By these beings whose lives depend on me,
Forced into a cycle of unending death.
The trees bend to my will,
Storms rock the seashores,
And men die by droves.
But my purpose is life,
And as my heart beats loudly,
My tears grow the grass tall.
Fields grow plentiful once more,
And again they forget.
They continue to attack my roots.
I cry out as I try to hold the world together.
I cry out as the heat burns my head and my feet.
I scream as the pain becom
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