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Second Draft Audition [2/5]

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second part for the :iconseconddraftoct:
<--Part 1 part 3-->
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Kinda bugs me that they're not contracting their words when they're apparently in a hurry. It kind of messes up the pacing of the scene, I think. Some of the dialogue is strangely worded too ("-we all gotta be doomed, ay?"), though it could just be a part of the toothy guy's speech quirk.