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Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army




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My other updates journal reached it's 60 kilobyte limit so I'm making a new journal, containing updates starting from Update #51 on September 13, 2015. I made this new journal during Update #63 (December 18, 2015) and that's when my previous update journal reached it's peak). Anyways, if you don't know already, this journal (and my previous one) contains a list of updates that has been happening ever since I originally completed my first/outdated storyline of Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (also known as "Konjiki no Gash!!: Mamono no Kakumei-gun" (金色のガッシュ! !:魔物革命軍) and "Zatch Bell! Mamodo Revolution Army") at Chapter 15 before I started to Ch. 15 sub-chapters to cover the missing gaps. I'll be using this journal for now on until I have 100 updates written in this journal, then I'll start a new one for 101 through 150 and so on.

Archived Update Journals
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List of fan fiction updates in this journal
  • UPDATE #51 (September 13, 2015, 11:29 p.m. EDT): As of now, Chapter 11 of my Zatch Bell! fan fiction remake is finally completed (or at least most likely but I'm ready to do Remake: Chapter 12 [Chapter 13 Remake]). Wow, 15 views already. If you have already checked out my Chapter 11 from my previous update, you should check it out again to see what I've now have written (I've also done some slight changes, but there are most likely grammar errors in my chapter remake until I start re-reading it for submission). But I'm leaving my Remake: Chapter 11 in a cliffhanger for Remake: Chapter 12. I'll probably start on that chapter remake tomorrow. I will be submitting this story arc once I'm done re-writing this story arc and the next story arc. In fact, I might combine both The Zulu Empire and the Pre-Revolution story arcs in my remade fan fiction. Together, those add up to 7 chapters but I might make 6 chapters and combine two chapters into one chapter (but maybe into two parts). (September 14, 2015, 12:34 a.m. EDT) Oh yeah, I'm deciding on what term I should give Dr. Zulu's and his robots' special attacks. Right now, the magic term I gave for my robotic antagonists' special attacks is Technomagic (short for "Technological Magic"). But there are also other suggestions that I'm thinking of like Magitek/Magitech (Magical technology, and this term came from Final Fantasy VI). I wonder if I should change name of the robotic magic I've given them. I've been doing research on the differences between technomagic and magitek/magitech (apparently technomagic is technology enhanced/controlled by magic while magitek is technology powered by magic or something like that) and I'm still not sure what term I should give for my Dembots' special abilities. I might change it to Magitek but I don't know which term makes more sense.
  • UPDATE #52 (September 15, 2015, 7:16 p.m. EDT): About what I said in the second half of my previous update, I decided to go with "Magitech" so I edited that in and used it as a general term for magical technology (and then as for my Dembots' special attacks, I would call them Magitech ability/power/attack. Anyways, I started writing Chapter 12 of my fan fiction's remade storyline. Right now, I just finished the battle from the previous chapter. Will work more on it later.
  • UPDATE #53 (September 25, 2015, 1:43 a.m. EDT): The first half of Chapter 12 of my fan fiction's remade storyline (a.k.a. Chapter 13 Remake) is completed. Took 10 days to do half of this chapter, but I haven't been active much except during nighttime before I go to bed. I'll start the second half of Chapter 12 in a new journal as "Part B" later and I'll update my chapter list in the Zatch Bell! Wiki Forum page later when I start Part B, but I'll update my Main Journal after posting this update. Most of the first part of Remake: Chapter 12 was just talk rather than action, which is why the chapter is already full with only 1.5 fights (finale of Yeti and the entire Thunderbird fight; I barely made it before the journal limit!). I'll have to do the Kraken and Phoenix fights in Part B of the chapter in a new journal. And I wonder if I should update my drawings in some of my Dembot Guardians (my drawing of Yeti is Phoenix are fine, but I think the Kraken's tentacle size may need adjustments. I may redo Thunderbird's design and make him look more menacing (looking back at my drawing of him, he does kind of look like a joke and not vicious enough like his A.I. personality/voice), plus, I may need to fix the highlights as I am not comfortable with the highlights I made for their metallic body (since they are in wrongs places and don't cover much). But chances are that I may be too lazy to fix the drawings of my first set of Dembot Guardians and if I were to do that, I'll also have to update my Mega Man 7 Stage Select parody with my Dembot Guardians, and that will be painful to do.
  • UPDATE #54 (October 9, 2015, 1:27 a.m. EDT): Well, I reached the 64 kilobyte journal limit in Chapter 12b of my fan fiction's remade storyline and I'm still not done writing this chapter (sorry for the really long delay as I haven't worked on this chapter much except at night and it's ending up being my longest chapter by far). :sigh: Ehh... but at least I'm on the final guardian battle but it's too bad I have no more room to finish it and Chapter 12a is nearly full too. I might either have to make a third part of this chapter (as Chapter 12c) or if my next chapter remake Chapter 13 (a.k.a. Chapter 14 Remake) ends up being somewhat shorter than I expected, I'll cram the final/fourth guardian battle from Chapter 12b (second half of Chapter 13 Remake) into Remake: Chapter 13's beginning. I'll probably finish this chapter up in three parts first, then I'll decide whether to merge Part C of Chapter 12 with my upcoming Chapter 13 or not if I have the room.
  • UPDATE #55 (October 14, 2015, 10:20 a.m. EDT): I'm finally done with my Remake: Chapter 12. Holy crud! That took me an entire month since Update #52 to finish this chapter remake. Sorry it took me a whole month to finish Chapter 12 but man, it's by far the longest chapter I have written. I made this chapter into 3 journals. THREE!!! And this chapter was based on Chapter 13 of the original storyline but I had a lot more to write about. I'll link to each part: Chapter 12aChapter 12bChapter 12c. Read them in order. Well, maybe not now (but you can if you're impatient but you'll have to deal with grammar errors), but perhaps once I submit them directly on DeviantART after I'm done with this story arc. I don't know if I'll keep these as a 3-part chapter. I may merge Part C with Chapter 13 if Chapter 13 doesn't take too long. I could have been done with this chapter remake much sooner if I worked 24/7, but I've been only working at night before going to sleep.
  • UPDATE #56 (November 8, 2015, 11:32 p.m. EST): I'm like 2/3rd or 3/4th completed with my Remake: Chapter 13. I just need to write the final battle that was in my outdated Chapter 14 (my Remake: Chapter 13's original counterpart), but I might write that in a separate part [journal] of the chapter, but if it's short enough to fit my first part, I'll merge it, but I doubt I'll have enough room on my first journal. Sorry that my chapter was taking so long but I had lots of distractions including housework, YouTube videos, and video games (I've been playing Guitar Hero Live a lot and I made a journal on that, and I'm thinking about doing video playthroughs of other games). Also, rather than introducing the term "Magitech" (Magical Technology) in Chapter 11, I edited my remade Chapters 47, and 10, including the term "magitech," defining it in Remake: Chapter 4 during the scenes inside Dr. Kido's and Dr. Koral Q's Robotics Shop, so you may want to recheck them out (especially Remake: Chapter 4).
  • UPDATE #57 (November 17, 2015, 7:02 p.m. EST): Chapter 13b of my remade ZB! fan fiction series is completed (and you can read 13a here). That pretty much concludes The Zulu Empire story arc (unless if I make Chapter 14 part of it too). [IDEA] Even though I completely omitted Konjiki no Gash Bell!! Movie 2: Attack of Mecha-Vulcan in my first storyline (because screw that movie), I found a way how to make connections to my remade storyline to that fan fiction and I made a little reference in Chapter 13b about the movie. Well, in the second Zatch Bell! movie, the movie's antagonist Dr. M2 said that he was the only demon conducting Magic Science. Throughout my entire fan fiction, my character Dr. Zulu, as well as the real characters Kido and Coral Q, were also interested in Magic Science, which went against what Dr. M2 said, creating a paradox with that movie (although I completely regarded the second movie to be non-existent to my fan fiction series, only regarding the first movie Unlisted Demon #101 to be the only movie with connections to my fan fiction, since I didn't really like the second movie and thought it was stupid). [FAN FICTION SPOILERS FOR CH. 14] I might introduce Dr. M2 in Remake: Chapter 14 (possible spoilers) and make him part of the Alternate/Past Timeline. For my fan fiction, he would be young Dr. Zulu's rival and because both Dr. Zulu's would be defeated, and with young Zeon not allowing young Kido or Coral Q to make magitech in the future, that'll make Dr. M2 the only person conducting Magic Science and creating magical technology (magitech).
  • UPDATE #58 (November 21, 2015, 12:58 a.m. EST): [Possible KnGB Movie 2: Attack of Mechavulcan spoilers, related to my fan fiction] About introducing/mentioning Dr. M2 in Chapter 14 of my fan fiction remake, SCREW IT!!! It would have been good if I had made the teenage Kiyo Takamine to give Gash a blue robotic Vulcan 300 back in Chapter 4 (rather, I just had him give Gash a blue-boxed Vulcan). Plus, I think Dr. M2 would just come from an alternate timeline (not from any of my fan fiction's timelines), an alternate timeline to as if in his timeline, [My assumption from 2nd movie] In Dr. M2's timeline, Kiyomaro made a fourth generation Vulcan as a robot right after he would come back from Coast School (if his day wasn't ruined by Death 18). For some reason, presumably after the Demon Battle (after Kiyomaro and Gash wins the battle), Dr. M2 studies Kiyomaro and is interesting in having a human research partner, steals the 4th generation Vulcan after the Demon Battle ended and examined Kiyomaro's creation, then heads back in time to the point where Kiyomaro would create the fourth generation Vulcan (after creating his Death Mechanics/Mecha-Vulcans).

    That's a good assumption that I just had. [Remake Ch. 14 (Pseudo)-Spoilers] Previously, I was going to make Dr. M2 part of my fan fiction, with adult Kiyomaro giving Gash an updated version of my main timeline's 4th generation Vulcan but as a robot (4th generation 2.0). And with both Kiyomaro being in the same era and with them and the others defeating Dr. Zulu (who I would have made him to be Dr. M2's former colleague/partner), it could have given Dr. M2 an interest into Kiyomaro. But it would have been too complex and complicated and would give an odd reasoning that could possibly offer for more questions. Oh well. The only connections that I would have with my fan fiction and the second movie is that Zeon Bell would ban Dr. Kido and Dr. Coral Q from creating anymore magitech/magical technology (in both time eras) and with both present and past Dr. Zulu's defeated (with present Dr. Zulu killed and past Dr. Zulu incapacitated via memory erase), it will give the explanation as to why Dr. M2 stated that he's the only demon conducting magic science in his time.
  • UPDATE #59 (November 23, 2015, 12:31 a.m. EST): I'm still working on Chapter 14 of my remade storyline. However, rather than it being a remake of Chapter 11: Attack in the Past, I'm making it a remake of Chapter 15-1: Operation: Oblivion, but including a few familiar scenes from Chapter 11: Attack in the Past. I'm also merging Saving History story arc with The Zulu Empire story arc (into The Zulu Empire and Saving History) and changing some chapter lists on my main ZB! journal and in my ZB! Wiki Forum thread. I know I said I wouldn't go off-track with my fan fiction remake in comparison to my outdated storyline, but this new chapter order works much better. [Remake: Chapter 16 spoilers] I'm giving my character Dr. Zulu and his younger counterpart some time before Dr. Zulu attacks Demon World in the past timeline, allowing Dr. Zulu to rebuild his army in the past before he makes his attack.
  • UPDATE #60 (November 29, 2015, 12:09 a.m. EST): Chapter 14: A Warless Future Begins of my fan fiction remake is completed and it is based on Chapter 15-1: Operation: Oblivion. Meanwhile, Chapter 11: Attack in the Past of my outdated/first storyline will be the final chapter of The Zulu Empire & Saving History story arc (as I have stated in my previous update). I'll begin Chapter 15 [Ch. 15-2 + 15+3 remake] later. After I complete Chapter 15, I'll remake Chapter 11 as Chapter 16 to wrap things up with this story arc.
  • UPDATE #61 (December 6, 2015, 11:29 p.m. EST): The first half of Chapter 15 is completed. I'm going to put all of the battles in a separate journal as Part B of the chapter. The match-ups from the original Chapter 15-2 is going to pretty much be the same but I am going to make Zatch Bell and Rain Bell switch places (from the way how I've written the match-up in my remade version, I had no choice but to switch up these two characters). I may be lazy enough to copy/paste the battles from the outdated Ch. 15-2 & 15-3 to Remake: Ch. 15b, but I would have to change it to my new match setup. Just to let you know for those who read the Alternate Chapter 15-3, it would be impossible for me to recreate that in this remade storyline, especially with Future Kolulu around with her Shin Raifojio to protect people from death.
  • UPDATE #62 (December 15, 2015, 1:36 a.m. EST): The second half of Chapter 15 is completed. I may take a break since Christmas is coming soon but I might most likely start working on Chapter 16 sooner (yeah, I most likely will). And once I complete Chapter 16, I'll start submitting each chapter in this story arc in a 3-day interval (after I reread each of my written chapters for grammar errors and stuff, of course). I wonder if I should bring Dr. M2 into my fan fiction. I'm creating a backup to an ending mentioning him in case if I do bring him into Ch. 16.
  • UPDATE #63 (December 18, 2015, 12:36 a.m. EST): I started Chapter 16 (just adding Ch. 15's recap for now). And I added some extra dialogue at the end of Chapter 15b to add an explanation to why my villainous character plans to attack at a specific time. And I'm still having a hard time deciding whether to use what I currently have or what I written as a backup (by the way, I'm going to delete that backup journal after I figure out what I should do for Chapter 16 and write it). It would be interesting for my favorite villainous OC to have a backstory and connection with Dr. M2 from the 2nd Movie, but at the same time, I want to remove that movie from existence (at least have Dr. M2 exist in another alternate universe/timeline away from any of my fan fiction's timelines) since I didn't really like it and that movie didn't make sense (I already covered theories for that movie, but Dr. M2 is just a weirdo that makes me question: Why did Dr. M2 do/made "those things" in the 2nd movie. It's why I didn't like that movie). Anyways, I do need to the plot to stay as close to my outdated storyline as possible. Sorry that this was just a minor (useless) update and nothing major. I'm still trying to think what I should do for Chapter 16.
  • UPDATE #64 (December 22, 2015, 1:24 a.m. EST): I'm not done with Chapter 16 and I'm nowhere near close (I'm probably still less than halfway), but in that chapter [SPOILERS] I'm also going to explain the story behind Kanchomé and Tia (I finally came up a stupid idea that would have to do), so I just rewrote the chapter from the middle to where I ended off from yesterday. And the battle with Dr. Zulu + his younger self (which I haven't written yet) will most likely be completely different than what I had in the original/outdated Chapter 11 but of course the outcome will still be the same, but I'm still thinking on how I should do it. And I won't be using or mentioning Dr. M2 from the 2nd Movie at all (and he is not going be affiliated with my villainous character in anyway, even though I thought it would have been interesting). I decided that he's not going to get involved with my fan fiction at all (otherwise there will be more things to write about in this chapter). Also, since Christmas is in 3 days, whether or not if I complete Chapter 16 by then (I would most likely not, knowing my schedule), I'll start posting chapters in a 3-day interval starting on December 25, 2015, so I better start re-reading the chapters I have written for errors. I was wanting to get Chapter 16 done before Christmas but that may not happen considering my daily schedule is mostly focused on watching YouTube videos and playing video games. Oh, gosh! Oh Noes!  I hope I don't break my promise, but my chapters need to be posted some time and it's been 3.5 months since I posted Chapter 10Ohnoes revamp I'm really slow when it comes to my fan fiction. Let's just say no guarantees and if I fail to deliver on Christmas, I will try New Years Day (January 1).
  • UPDATE #65 (December 29, 2015, 10:38 p.m. EST): Well, I'm really close of reach the journal limit in Chapter 16 (I haven't hit the limit yet but I know I'm close) and I managed to get that entire battle in that journal before hitting that journal limit. I just created another journal for the second half. This chapter... is really going to get dark. And I'm thinking about creating an alternate version with alternate/"What If" scenes in this chapter (which would be even more darker). Also, in my main journal, I flipped my list of chapters and put my remade storyline on top since I'm focused on my remade storyline (I no longer care about my old storyline). By the way, I introduced some NEW ORIGINAL CHARACTERS, exclusive to Chapter 16a and 16b, but I only have two of the three new characters introduced and drawn, so check them out. I haven't introduced or drawn the third one yet, that will eventually be seen in Chapter 16b (I just need to figure out what my third character would look like as it's going to be crazy!), but I'm not submitting the image (even when I do finish it) until I draw my third character and when I'm ready to submit this chapter when it's time.
  • UPDATE #66 (January 1, 2016, 12:50 a.m. EST): HAPPY NEW YEARS EVERYONE! Happy New Year 2011 As a celebration, I release 3 PARTS of Chapter 12 [Part A, Part B, Part C] of my Zatch Bell! fan fiction remade storyline, based on Chapter 13 of my outdated version. This has been by far the LONGEST chapter I have written, and it was based on a chapter with a single journal written (and yet, my remade version took THREE WHOLE JOURNALS TO COMPLETE!!!). While Part A had a good amount of views (34 views) while it was in my Sta.sh, Part B only had 8 views in my Sta.sh while Part C only had 4 views. Why haven't you guys read Part B or Part C yet and skipped to the next chapters (although it was a good idea not to read them yet since they had a lot of fixing before I submitted them on DeviantART)? lol And I have linked these chapters in my journals and Wiki forum. And that two me two days to re-read everything I wrote in Remake: Chapter 12 (all three parts), checking to see if all links are working properly, to see if I linked every character and stuff, fixing grammar, and making some changes (like adding names to each type of robot I made).

    Anyways, enjoy. I'll post Chapter 14 next week unless if I can get Chapter 16b done sooner (as well as possibly an alternate version of Chapter 16b with "What If" scenarios, since I'm thinking of doing that). But first, before continuing with Chapter 16, I'm going to re-read everything else I have written up until Chapter 16a. Speaking of Chapter 16, for those of you that viewed my draft version beforehand on MY NEW CHARACTER DRAWINGS for Chapter 16 (I still haven't drawn my third character yet since I'm too busy writing and re-reading chapters), if you haven't looked at them already but if you haven't checked out Chapter 16 yet (even though I'm still working on it), then it will have SPOILERS. Speaking of SPOILERS, while I was re-reading Chapter 12 (particularly the third part), without even remembering or know, I accidentally foreshadowed a dialogue that would actually happen in Chapter 16 (I laughed the moment I read on what I wrote months ago, and I didn't realize it until I read it. What I did in Chapter 16 was random. lol What a coincidental foreshadow I just created in Chapter 12c). If you have already checked out what I have written in Chapter 16 and read Chapter 12c, you'll know what I'm talking about, if you can figure it out.

    (January 1, 2016, 1:46 a.m. EST): I just realized I could have made the three parts of Remake: Chapter 12 into separate chapters and re-title them (as well as Remade: Chapter 11) "Guardian of the Earth/Sky/Sea/Mountain" respectively since there's a major battle in each journal, but oh, well. It's probably best for me to stick with what I have though, but it was just a recent thought.
  • UPDATE #67 (January 7, 2016, 11:55 p.m. EST): Chapter 16b is finally completed (click here to see Chapter 16a if you haven't already)! Finally, this story arc is actually completed. Actually, I plan on making an alternate version of Chapter 16b (which would be based on Chapter 15-3's Alternate version and if you've read that, you know what will happen in Chapter 16b's Alternate version, but of course it will be written from scratch), but the main story arc is completed. This is actually a really good spot to end this fan fiction. Well, it normally WOULD be a good spot to end this fan fiction, but because I planned on remaking the whole thing, I also need to do remake the next story arc (the Revolution from the Dead story arc as two arcs). Anyways, I still need to explain the Spirit World in my remake storyline anyway so I would have to continue with this fan fiction remake either way. But I will take a break from making chapters for a while. The reason why Chapter 16b's progress was delayed for a few days after I introduced the Chimerabot was because I was re-reading over my other chapters from my Sta.sh since I planned on releasing each chapter ever week since Christmas 2015 until I finished it. Also, my Internet became unstable in the last few days, making it impossible for me to work on my fan fiction. However, I have took the time to draw new characters (I drawn the unknown character during the time my Internet messed up but I can't seem update an image from Sta.sh unless if I re-upload the image and fix all of my links linking to the old one). My Chimerabot looks like one crazy-but-cool-looking giant android, like a Transformer. I'll upload and update that image when I'm ready do submit Chapter 16 and I will upload Chapter 13 (Parts A and B) very soon, then upload the rest of the chapters in a 3-day interval until Chapter 16 is released (I still need to re-read over Chapter 16a and my recently finished Chapter 16b but I have ever chapter read and fixed). (January 8, 2016, 12:10 a.m. EST): Within 5 minutes after this journal was posted, I uploaded Chapter 13a and 13b. And since I can't update my Chapter 16 character drawings, I'm uploading my drawing of Chimerabot separately but I will add him to the main drawing when I'm ready to submit Chapter 16.
  • UPDATE #68 (January 11, 2016, 12:06 a.m. EST): Chapter 14 is now on DeviantART. Earlier a few days ago, I updated the alternate version of Chapter 8b, fixing the timeline placement for the future chapters since I moved some chapters around. Speaking of alternate chapters, I haven't really written anything in my Chapter 16b Alternative (with "What If" scenarios) yet since I'm still re-reading Chapter 16b for errors (I re-read Chapter 16a yesterday) and I would have done that by now if I wasn't held back doing other things. Speaking of errors, I'm glad I quickly scanned over Chapter 14 before submitting it because I found a few typos I missed. I wonder if I can get Chapter 16b Alternate done before 3 days after I get Chapter 16 uploaded on DeviantART.
  • UPDATE #69 (January 13, 2016, 6:03 p.m. EST): I finished my alternate version of Chapter 16b Alternative. This is a remake to Chapter 15-3's Alternate version but written differently. And just like the old Ch. 15-3 Alt, this "What If" chapter made me cry while writing it.Waaaah! Oh man, writing these tragic scenes really gets to me, even though I'm a man.La la la la Anyways, tonight before going to bed, I'm going to publish Chapter 15a and 15b. Three days later, I'll publish Chapter 16a, 16b, and 16b's Alternate (once I re-read over my 16b Alt since I just got done writing it) and that will be that. I think I will take a long break before writing the final story arc (as two story arcs), although I might be lying to myself and start sooner than I say. From what I have written so far, it normally is the perfect way to end my fan fiction as I don't have to remake the last storyline, but I think I should just get to get it done. Actually, since I introduced some of my Spirit World Gods in my alternate chapters, I'll have to remake the rest of my chapters to introduce them properly.
  • UPDATE #70 (January 14, 2016, 5:18 p.m. EST): I DUN GOOF!!!Stupid Me! Sorry that I'm late (that's my first mistake), but I finally have Chapter 15a and Chapter 15b uploaded (I forgot to do that at midnight before going to bed, but better late than never; though the day has never ended yet so it's fine). However, while submitting them s bit late, I accidentally submitted Chapter 15b first before 15a (my second mistake but a minor one that I took too seriously and I should have stopped there). So, I deleted my first entry of Chapter 15b (I copied/pasted everything beforehand) and put them all in a new entry, then re-submit it. However, now the view counter for that chapter is reset to 0 since I submit a new entry for Chapter 15b (though I'm not a view hog). Also, that would break all of my Chapter 15b Sta.sh links that would redirect to it (my third mistake, but I doubt anyone will click on them and it's a good thing I use new links). Despite all the mistakes I made just now, everything should be fine.
  • UPDATE #71 (January 17, 2016, 10:45 a.m. EST): Chapter 16 (Part A, Part B, Part B's Alternate) is now on DeviantART! I also uploaded/updated my new character drawings of the Chapter 16 characters (well, my robots). Chapter 16a and Chapter 16b will have some epic action. Oh the Mega Man homage! However, warning, the alternate version of 16b is very tragic and saddening, just like Chapter 15-3 Alternate of my outdated series so grab some tissues on the adventure of FEELS! :lol: Anyways, it's going to be a LONG TIME until I start remaking the final story arc (even if I were to start now, it will take many months to finish it).
    UPDATE #72 (January 18, 2016, 10:22 p.m. EST): Alright, breaks over. I'm going to resume my fan fiction with Remake: Chapter 17. In the chapter list of my Main ZB! Journal and my ZB! Wiki Forum Page, I have entitled this upcoming chapter "Peace is Back... or is it?", which would be a remake of Chapter 15-4 "The Calm Before Another Storm", but instead, I might merge/combine my upcoming Remake: Chapter 17 and Chapter 18, making it a remake of both Chapter 15-4 "The Calm Before Another Storm" and Chapter 15-5 "The Netherworld" and calling it by the name I've given to Remake: Chapter 18: "Depths of the Netherworld". Once I finish this chapter after merging both chapters, I'll fix my chapter list on my main journal and Wiki forum page (but I need to experiment first). Also, because I'm starting my fan fiction again, no more drawing requests. I know some people requested me to draw stuff beforehand, but I apologize for not fulfilling your wish (I'm just way too busy but I have told my requestees that I wouldn't guarantee that I will fulfill their requests; drawing isn't the main part of my life after all and I would have to rely on character bases when trying to do certain requests if available since I suck at drawing humans from scratch).
  • UPDATE #73 (February 6, 2016, 11:46 p.m. EST): I'm finish with the Ch. 15-4 part of my Remake: Chapter 17. For the Ch. 15-5 part (since I'm combining both chapters), I'm going to do that in a separate journal as Part B for now unless if I can fit them all in one journal (I doubt it though). I've been really slow when making these chapters since I got some new video games that I would like to play and such, but I will be working on this when I can and when I feel like to (which is usually at night before I go to bed).
  • UPDATE #74 (February 22, 2016, 12:36 p.m. EST): I'm finally done with Chapter 17b (here is Part A if you missed it). Wow, did it really take me a month to do a single chapter (though I combined two chapters into one). Man, I have been taking more breaks than I thought. Sorry about that. Anyway, I would have finished this a few days ago, but my Internet has been acting up so badly since a few days ago so I barely had anytime to access the Internet (I even had a hard time watching YouTube videos). My Internet has slightly gotten better today (or yesterday), but I'm still having Internet issues from time-to-time (getting randomly disconnected from the Internet or getting low Wi-Fi bars) but I was able to finish writing Chapter 17. That chapter should haven't taken me a whole month to do. I could have done that in a week or two but I had too many distractions. Oh yeah, distractions... I've been distracted with lots of Undertale videos lately (and I even played that game during my break). Thank you all for being patient with me and/or sorry for making you guys wait that long. I'm pretty sure I posted this several times but this fan fiction remake is not my top priority on my "to do list," but I do think about my fan fiction all the time but I usually don't know how I should start each new session every time I do this fan fiction.
  • UPDATE #75 (March 2, 2016, 12:08 a.m. EST): Okay, it's a new month and I barely have anything written for Remake: Chapter 18. I really have been lazy with my fan fiction remake so there is no excuse of me not working on it. Well, I had Internet connection issues for a whole week (I'm glad my Internet is better again) but I've been really slacking off, but I'm still trying to think what should I write for that chapter. I know I could copy/paste from the older version and make things to go by faster but I want to write the chapter differently since I'm going to combine Chapter 15-6 and 15-7 into one chapter like I combined Chapter 15-4 and 15-5 for Remake: Chapter 17. If I wasn't slacking off and had issues, I could have finished at least 3 chapters by now (well, 5 chapters re-written as 3 chapters since I'm combining chapters) and it took me a whole month to complete Remake: Chapter 17. *Sigh*:sigh:  I think I'm just getting bored re-writing something that I already written. So close yet so far only because of my activities. If I wasn't too distracted watching Undertale gameplay videos, playing RollerCoaster Tycoon 2/3, and making music, I would have finished at least a few chapters by now. I want to get my Zatch Bell! fan fiction remake project done so I can move on and make more music and do other projects (I'm thinking of reviving my "The Weapon Gallery" project but as a comic series but... maybe... I don't know), yet, I don't feel like working on my fan fiction (I still think about it everyday though, but I don't know how I should write it). I really need to get myself in the right mood if I want to complete this fan fiction remake, but how? I bet fans are checking my entries everyday, hoping to see something new written in my latest chapter, yet feel disappointed I haven't done anything. :bademoticon: I know that feeling when I wait for some favorite software developer(s) of mine to make updates (like for my favorite video game). Anyways, please be patient with me until I can write stories again.sigh I need "determination," I really need "determination," but I'm lacking hope.
  • UPDATE #76 (March 10, 2016, 1:32 a.m. EST): I'm FINALLY done with the first half of Chapter 18, which is a remake of Chapter 15-6. The second half (I'm going to take a little break though) will be a remake of Chapter 15-7. So, I pretty much have 3 of the original chapters of this storyline remade so far. In this remade storyline, I renamed some Spirit World magic. Earlier when I first worked on this story arc, I changed the species name archdemon to archdevil (Japanese name is still the same: dai akuma) since I added a species called "devil" (akuma) in the remade storyline (they never existed in my first storyline). For the types of Spirit World magic, I changed the divine/gray Spirit World magic type "Ether" to "Æther" (Aether). I also renamed some Spirit World magic spells like I changed Lucid's Black Aura to Nightmare Aura, Lucid's Dark Assassin to Nightmare Deathblow, King Yama's Space Ether type to Dimension Æther and Necro-Ether/Necro-Curse to Soul Æther/Soul Curse. A few Spirit World magic spells were slightly modified in the remade storyline like Lucid's Nightmare Blade is more scarier than in the first storyline. And I've given some gods new spells like Black Purgatory and Hellhounds of Fury for Cerberus and a few Darkness Blessings to Lucid (which is contradictory to him being an archdevil). *SIGH!* I still can't believe it took me a month to finish a HALF of this chapter, but I'm spending so much time doing other things.
  • UPDATE #77 (March 20, 2016, 10:29 p.m. EDT): I'm done with Remake: Chapter 18b. Now I've gotten four chapters covered within these two remade chapters. I'm going to take a little break before starting Remake: Chapter 19, which will be a remake of Chapter 15-8 but I'm not sure if I'll combine Chapter 15-9 with that too (I'll probably remake the rest of the chapters individually from here on out). I'm going to work on some of my music projects before starting Chapter 19. I think I could copy/paste older chapters from here out with ease with little changes (or not) since there wouldn't be much to change except with names and some characters. I don't know, I'll see how it goes when I actually work on the rest of the chapters.
  • UPDATE #78 (April 11, 2016, 2:09 a.m. EDT): It's been almost a month since my previous update. I apologize for my inactivity. Chapter 19a is still not done (and I know that I'll be making a second part of that chapter since it's going to be really detailed). I haven't been editing it in like a week (well, in the middle of the week, I have gotten a few work done, including making a new OC). I've been really busy with other things including making music (currently working on my second Digimon Evolution Medley). Also, my relatives from Michigan came down to Florida so I spent some time with them. And I have been setting up some game settings on a few of my games and I got new games so that has occupied my time. I was wanting to work on my fan fiction yesterday but I still got distracted. If I didn't had too many distractions, I would have been done with this chapter maybe a few days ago, but it will still take a few weeks with my speed. (I just want to get this fan fiction remake done, yet, I'm unable to with my activity limitation). ..... I wonder how many times I complained about my lack of motivation.
  • UPDATE #79 (April 16, 2016, 12:34 a.m. EDT): I think I'm done with Chapter 19a (took me 20 days to do this part). I'll try to finish the rest of the chapter in a second journal (hopefully it will fit that I won't have to make a third journal) sometime later.
  • UPDATE #80 (April 18, 2016, 12:09 a.m. EDT): I forgot to do some things in Chapter 19a and made some fixes/changes. The biggest thing I forgot to add was Danny (I now added him within the knight's battle but off-screen). I made a few other minor fixes. Anyways, I just started writing the second half (just a little bit for now).
  • UPDATE #81 (May 8, 2016, 1:14 a.m. EDT): I'm finally done with Chapter 19b!!! :D Dang, took me over a month. This was a difficult chapter to write (until I got to the final section). Coming up battle scenarios is harder than I thought... or just as hard as I remembered (but I have fun doing that). What a climatic chapter. The climax, the tragedy, the epic action! I wonder how things will be in the next chapter. All I need to do is remake Chapter 15-9, 15-10, 15-11, and 15-12. Four more chapters, and I'm finally done with this fan fiction series for good and perhaps I could start a new project; probably an original series/franchise. I'm not making a sequel to this fan fiction (I decided), and I'm definitely not another reboot/remake of this whether it's better or worse (who knew remaking a fan fiction I written can be really boring). Okay, good night everyone! And I might start the next chapter tomorrow or in the next day or something. Break time! Though, I might be going away in June after my birthday for a wedding so I wonder if I can get the next chapter done by then. I doubt it knowing my activity speed but I should make it my goal (I only got less than a month!).
  • UPDATE #82 (May 15, 2016, 1:31 a.m. EDT): I'm working on Chapter 20a (and yes it will definitely be multi-parter; probably 2 or 3 journals, hopefully just two). Started about 6 days ago. Originally, I titled this chapter "Reunited with a New Power" as the remake of Chapter 15-9, but instead of just being a remake of Chapter 15-9, I'm deciding to merge Chapter 15-9 and 15-10 together in this chapter remake. I just remembered when I was working on these chapters for the first that I wanted to get all the deity battles into one chapter but they wouldn't fit in a single journal. I just remembered that a few days ago (I really have forgotten about that until now). That made me decide to combine those two chapters for this remade chapter and I'm renaming the chapter to "Ragnarök: Archangels vs. Archdevils", which would have been Remake: Chapter 21's title if I didn't decide to merge these chapters. Anyways, all I wrote before posting this update status was [SPOILERS] the Saturn vs. Lucid fight (I'm starting off the first main battle with that instead of Venus vs. Leviasatan fight, which I might do last [that was the first one in Ch. 15-9 while the Sat. v Luc. fight was the last one in Ch. 15-10], but all of these battles happens almost simultaneously but the new order I decided is the best order to write in and makes more sense than what I originally wrote in). Also gave my character Saturn some new powers and renamed some of them.
  • UPDATE #83 (May 21, 2016, 10:47 a.m. EDT): Chapter 20a is completed. I got two of the four battles completed including [SPOILERS] Saturn's and Mercury's battles. Mars' and Venus' battles will be the second with with Mars next and Venus last. I might make some fixes in Chapter 20a if I remember what I wanted to change in it and I'll start the second half of the chapter another time (hopefully there won't be a Part C).
  • UPDATE #84 (June 1, 2016, 8:52 p.m. EDT): I think I am done with Chapter 20b (maybe). I completed the four main god battles in my chapter, though, I haven't written everything was from Chapters 15-9 and 15-10 yet (I still have to do the parts with Zega and Dr. Zulu from those chapters) but I'm nearly at the character limit for Chapter 20b. I may have to either make a Part C and add those in (and transfer the Leviasatan battle to that part so it could even the text length in my journals) or add those parts from those original chapters into Remake: Chapter 21. I won't have time to do Remake: Chapter 21 since I'm going to be away for at least a week for a family event in Michigan (my birth place). In other words, I'm going to be taking a mandatory vacation, so no computer. Don't know when I'll be back to Florida (where I live). Anyways, Remake: Chapter 20 was really interesting for me to write. [LITTLE SPOILERS FOR WHAT I'VE DONE] I made new original characters and even introduced one of the "backstaged villainous organizations" in my fan fiction (I'm just going to call it that) and what happened to those Royal Knights; what they have done while my main characters are facing the Demon Revolution Army. I might do some character drawings of my new Royal Knight OCs (I already did one in April) as well as the villain that those Royal Knights faced. The flashback with them will also explain somethings that happened to my original main antagonist Zecross.
  • UPDATE #85 (June 21, 2016, 7:10 p.m. EDT): I ACCIDENTALLY DELETED CHAPTER 19a FROM MY STA.SH!!!! D: Not my fault! I had an incomplete drawing in that folder that I was deleting (after finishing the full drawing). I specifically targeted my W.I.P. drawing and click delete on my W.I.P. but for some reason, it didn't do that, auto-refreshed the page, and Chapter 19a is gone. (All that hard work... gone... Crying :sadtard: ). I submitted a bug report about this to DeviantART, hoping if they can recover my deleted journal because I don't want to rewrite everything (and I can't remember everything I've written; I haven't backed up the stuff I've written and there is not a backup in my draft). Well, I'm still going to work on Chapter 21a (I forgot to mention that I've already started that; well at least forgot to mention it in this journal). After doing that part, if DeviantART is unable to restore Chapter 19a, I will try to remake it as much as I can before starting Chapter 21b (I know I'll have multiple parts in this chapter, I can tell) but it won't be the same word-by-word. No way can I remember all of the actions in each battle. Well, maybe I can once I start remaking it, hopefully...... I really need to back up all of my unpublished chapters to my computer (I haven't done that in a long time). (8:17 p.m. EDT): I managed to recover Ch. 19a in a new journal. While I still had a tab up in my web browser before the accident delete, I clicked Submit (I took a risk) and the Submission page had everything I've written (I'm SO LUCKY!!!). I copy/pasted everything in the Submission page into a new journal, so, here is the NEW Chapter 19a with 0 views (don't care about the loss of views anyway).
  • UPDATE #86 (July 3, 2016, 12:06 a.m. EDT): I'm done with the first half of Chapter 21. The second half will have the four battles that were in Chapter 15-11 (hopefully it doesn't exceed past journal limit and I was so close of exceeding this Ch. 19a's journal limit, at least I felt like it was), but I have everything prepared in the Chapter 19a. And I'm going to post some thoughts I've been having since a month. I might extend my fan fiction (MAYBE!!!!! But no guarantees since I would like to move on to other projects), expanding the second timeline in my fan fiction, adding more villainous characters that were never seen in my fan fiction (but only indirectly mentioned) as well as giving in-depth to one of them that I mentioned in my newer chapters. Would be interesting to do but I do want to move on and work on other things. But I most likely won't be doing a sequel taking place in Year 3000's Mamodo/Demon Battle (as interesting it would be for me to make all apes sentient and have them participate in the mamodo/demon battle as mamodo/demon's partners other than humans, I don't want to spend time creating 200+ OC's [though I wouldn't need that much if I plan well]). But I'll have sentient great apes in a different project if I ever do it, if I'm ever ready to start a huge fictional novel project that will last for many long years (length similar to J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter novel franchise).
  • UPDATE #87 (July 10, 2016, 2:10 a.m. EDT): I'm not done with the second half of Chapter 21 but I'm nearly done with the first battle of that part....... Well... Sorry for my slow activity. :XD: I really haven't been much inactive in working the second part of this chapter. I would have been done by now if I actually did work on this chapter and I would have been on my final chapter by now. I just haven't felt like working on it. I was kind of hyped working on it but when I actually started it, I didn't feel like writing anything, even though I copy/pasted everything from the older version into my chapter. Well, I'm most likely going to copy the same battle sequences for my remade version but probably add some extra techniques/abilities and turns (except for the last of the four main battles since I swapped characters in that one). I don't know when I'm going to get done with this chapter because of my activity speed but it will be done but I know I could have gotten it done by now if I actually did work on this chapter instead of being lazy.
  • UPDATE #88 (July 19, 2016, 6:18 p.m. EDT): Today is the 2-year anniversary of my Golden Gash: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction. To celebrate this anniversary, I'm submitted Chapter 17a and 17b that have been lurking in my Sta.sh for 6 months. I'm still not done with this story arc. I still have like 1.3 more chapters to write (I'm nearly done with Chapter 21b) but because this is the 2-year anniversary for my fan fiction, why not? However, until I finish rewriting the Revolution from the Dead story arc, I will submit new chapters once every week, then I'll go back to 3 days for each chapter if I do finish in time. Also, I'm thinking if I should do another story arc but in my alternate timeline. I came up with so many ideas out of nowhere but I'm not sure if I want to waste any more time with this fan fiction. I'll still think about that.
  • UPDATE #89 (July 20, 2016, 5:51 p.m. EDT): Chapter 21b of my fan fiction remake is COMPLETE!!! FINALLY!!! ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT TO GO!!! :D :D :D Can I complete the final chapter before my release schedule is up-to-date? But if I do complete it early, I'll do 3-day releases of my chapters but until I do complete my final chapter, I might post chapters weekly.
  • UPDATE #90 (July 26, 2016, 6:33 p.m. EDT): Chapter 18a/18b is released. I really need to work on my final chapter faster.
  • UPDATE #91 (July 31, 2016, 3:06 p.m. EDT): CHAPTER 22 IS FINALLY DONE! I'M FINALLY DONE WRITING MY FAN FICTION!!! WOOO!! Well, sort of. I didn't write the epilogue of my fan fiction and I think I'll ignore that, PLUS, I wrote a potential sequel / potential new story arc to what I have written at the end of Chapter 22 and I have so many ideas in my head for a new original story arc taking place in the 2nd timeline in the past of my fan fiction. I don't know if I'll actually write it. If I don't ever write it, I might alter the ending of Chapter 22. After I release Chapter 19, which will be in a few days, I'll go back to my usual 3-day chapter uploads.
  • UPDATE #92 (August 2, 2016, 7:26 p.m. EDT): Chapter 19a and 19b are now released. However, while I did check over Chapter 19a for grammar errors and fixes, I haven't fixed everything in Chapter 19b yet but I was in a rush to get this chapter out. Give me some time to look over Chapter 19b and fix whatever needs to be fixed. I'll be late in submitting this chapter on FanFiction.NET.
  • UPDATE #93 (August 5, 2016, 2:59 p.m. EDT): Chapter 20A and B of my Zatch Bell! fan fiction is up along with THREE NEW CHARACTERS!!! This is like my biggest chapter (well, not counting Chapter 13) and I mean like detail-wise. Lots of story to tell in that chapter.
  • UPDATE #94 (August 8, 2016, 11:19 a.m. EDT): Chapter 21A and B of my Zatch Bell! fan fiction is up. ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT UNTIL THIS STORY ARC IS COMPLETED!!! :D Though, I'm thinking about writing a new, original story arc.
  • UPDATE #95 (August 11, 2016, 12:06 p.m. EDT): Chapter 22 of my Zatch Bell! fan fiction, which may be the final chapter of my fan fiction remake (unless if I do a new story arc, which I may or may not do), is released. Finally done with this fan fiction. Not sure if I want to do a sequel or another story arc but I'm kind of tempted to do another story arc because of what I have in my imagination, but if I do, it probably won't be for a long time. Thank you guys for reading my fanfic (if you did) and sorry to end it off on some odd cliffhanger if it counts as one, but it's just in case if I do another story arc.
  • UPDATE #96 (September 8, 2016, 2:25 a.m. EDT): Since Humble Bundle had a huge sale for a GameMaker Studio bundle, I bought that and I have been thinking... I should make a Zatch Bell!-themed Mega Man game (and I also downloaded the Mega Engine by WreckingPrograms for GM Studio Pro). Ever since I created Dr. Zulu for my Zatch Bell!/Konjiki no Gash Bell!! fan fiction (and of course he was inspired by Dr. Wily, the main antagonist of the Mega Man classic series), I wanted to create a Mega Man-like game based around Dr. Zulu (with his Robodoruku cyber-battle armor) and his robots/creations, with his Dembot Guardians [2 links] replacing the Robot Masters and his Dembot Masters being some of the final bosses in the fan game. And I'll call this ZB! x MM fan game Mega Zulu. I have drawn a parody of Mega Man 7 with Dr. Zulu and his Dembot Guardians at one time. xD I wonder if I can make that a reality. HOWEVER... DON'T GET YOUR HOPES UP OR BE HYPED YET. While I have taken Game & Simulation I class in high school (and worked with the Scratch game/animation interactive engine), I am new to GameMaker Studio and I don't really know how to use it, PLUS, it could take me years to make a Mega Man-like game alone. Basically, I am telling you guys what I would love to do, but in reality, it MAY NOT come true... maybe. Likewise, I also once thought about making an RPG based on my Golden Gash!! Demon Revolution Army in RPG Maker XV but I don't think I could do that either since that too would take forever.

    That's not the only "possible" news. Another "possible" news is that: As I have been getting more ideas in my head for my possible sequel/new story arc, I'm thinking about writing it. I have said it before but now there's a bigger chance that I might write a new story arc (but not yet). Well, I should write it since it will help me with my writing abilities for when I do a big writing project (if I do one). But, if I had to either write a new story arc or make a video game, I would write my new story arc first before making a video game based on my fan fiction.
  • UPDATE #97 (September 12, 2016, 11:21 p.m. EDT): Wooo! fat :la: I can't believe I actually drew my random Zatch Bell! military OC characters (though I still have yet to draw the Angel Captain Lucius from my fan fiction remake Chapter 20a, but at least I got my other randoms drawn) that were in my Golden Gash!! Demon Revolution Army (remake) fan fiction (ones that were introduced in Chapter 14).

    Now, looking back at my Ninja Captain Kanchomé and Ninja Vice Captain Byonko drawing, the random Ninja Infantries I drew look a whole lot better than my Kanchomé/Byonko drawing, which is kind of embarrassing. I might remake my Kanchomé/Byonko drawing, as well as my Ninja Vice Captain Pancho drawing. But other characters I will eventually draw is the Angel Captain Lucius (that will be after I remake my main ninja drawings) and the Fortune Teller Lady (I have started that weeks ago but I never finished it since it's really hard thinking a facial design for her and drawing it).
  • UPDATE #98 (September 17, 2016): This is not fan fiction-related but I FINALLY FINISHED MY ZATCH BELL! CHARACTER SONG METAL MEDLEY!!! :la: AND THERE IS A PHASE SHIFT NOTE CHART TO GUITAR HERO/ROCK BAND PLAYERS THAT PLAY ON PC!!! :la: We are almost at 100 updates! :la:
  • UPDATE #99 (September 19, 2016, 8:22 p.m. EDT): I might actually write a sequel/new story arc to/for my Zatch Bell! fan fiction after all, taking place in the past timeline, entitled "The Fallen King" (either as Golden Gash!! The Fallen King or Golden Gash!! Demon Revolution Army - The Fallen King or something like that). I wrote some character profiles and I'm currently making a plot summary for each future chapter to make sure I know what I want to write when the time comes so I don't forget. Now, I won't be posting chapters for a long time. I want to make sure all chapters I write in the future would be good enough that I wouldn't have to edit them after submitting them (and even remaking my fan fiction, there was something I wanted to do but couldn't do it but still can do it in this new story arc). Also, this is Update #99. One more update left for this journal, then my next journal for the rest of my Zatch Bell! fan fiction updates may be called Golden Gash!! The Fallen King UPDATES [1-50]. The last update for this journal will be posted whenever I finish writing plot synopsis for all possible future chapters and before I start writing DRA Chapter 23 / TFK Chapter 1.
  • NewUPDATE #100 (October 4, 2016, 9:45 p.m. EDT): Never mind about the last part above. Now that I got CORE membership, I updated my journal skin with extra links in the header (including this journal and the link to my remade version on FanFiction.NET) and I will apply my journal skin to all of my chapters and remove the chapter list from their description. As for my "The Fallen King" fan fiction, I've written 6 chapter summaries with ideas/dialogues and I've made up a bunch of OC's. If you want to check them out, find a link in this journal leading to my folder of unpublished Zatch Bell! fanfic work if you're curious enough what I have and want to be spoiled (but anything written there may not be final). ;) Last update for this journal and I'll create a new journal once I finish writing summaries for all of my future chapters (if I do it, since I cancel this any time I want to).



List of Chapters (remake)

Volume 1: Demon Revolutionary War - The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Demon Revolutionary War - Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Revolution from the Dead
Volume 5: The Fallen King - Reign of Chaos
Volume 6: The Fallen King - Battle of the Dead
Volume 7: The Fallen King - For the Nether

List of Chapters (original/obsolete)

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