Undyne

(( This is my first critique, so please don't kill me ;A; ))

So. I think this is awesome. Seriously, no matter what the stars will tell you, I think that this is one of the best pieces of artwork I've ever seen! That, and counting that I loath my art style...

Anyways, for the visual appeal, it looks fantastical! The gills on her neck, the little scars on her fins, heck, even the dazzling light effects are amazing! What would have been funny is Alphys or someone you ship Undyne with, at the top, having a hardcore nosebleed. But, whether you did that or not, I think that this section is covered from head to toe in awesomeness!

Next is the originality. Of course, no one's done this position with Undyne before, and that she's under the water with a spear; but I just think that Undyne underneath the water is almost like every art piece with her. Sure, there's a picture of her in a suit, and her with her hair down, but just it seems a little cliche to me. BUT cause I'm a nice person, I won't take off too many stars for that!

Up next is the technique. Now, I really didn't understand what it meant by 'technique', so I'm just gonna rate your art style. And if you didn't read the stars, IT'S AMAZING. The anime like style really makes me smile, and the tiniest details of the drawing make me happy that you pay attention. I can't really attempt to express my liking for this art piece, just cause it's so likeable!

Overall, this is one of the best Undyne art pieces on the internet! The art style, the lighting, the minuscules details; heck, even the bubbles are impressive! So, basically, don't stop what you're doing, and continue to make beautiful art pieces just like this!