Fear Before the Fall Page 9

I did it. I managed to get the next page out before the end of the month. Alright so a bit of a light hearted page.  It won't always be this way and I hope for the comic to get back to being dark again soon. But Fear is testing his powers. This is the first time he actually manifests a fear and not just attacks someone within their own mind.  That giant monster amoeba really was just floating around in the HQ.  So apparently this protein has a fear if microbes which Fear exploited quite well.  Now I know I always say no critique on my art but if you see a common sense mistake I missed please tell me. Always let me know if there are spelling errors. I can fix those easily.  And if I forget to color a line I'd like to know.  Sometimes I can't tell black from a dark color on my monitor. Especially if I was coloring in a bright room.  Other than that I think this page turned out nice.  Next one will be better. I guess the lesson here is be careful who you talk to so casually.  This protein had no idea it was Fear himself.

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Termine esta pagina antes del fin del mes. Miedo esta probando sus poderes nuevos. Es la primera vez que manifesta un miedo el la vida real y no en la mente de la victima. Esa amoeba deveras estaba en el quartel general.  Esa proteina tiene miedo a los microbios. Asi que tengan quidado con quien hablen tan casualmente. No sabia que era el miedo el mismo.

Traduccion:
Panal 1: Con permiso.  Como te subiste aqui ariba?
Panal 2: No te preocupas sobre eso, amigo.
Panal 3: ...preocupar e lo que hago. Ahor tengo que saber como salir de aqui
Panal 4: Perdon. Regla 57 dice que...
Panal 5: Miedo: Me lo vas a decier.
Proteina: Es esta panal alla. Va a conducto central. Y de alli va a las cinco islas. No me hagas daño. Por favor haga lo parar! HAGALO PARAR!
panal 6: Miedo: Haga que parar? Gracias por tu cooperacion. Mantengamos esto entre nosotros. Ahore ve te.
Panal 7: Quien eres?
Panal 8: Miedo: Soy Miedo.




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