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Suraya

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I finally finished this one. It was about time Suraya got a proper drawing! :D

So, since most of you don't know her yet, let me introduce her to you:
Suraya (her actual name is "Virginie", but she despises it) is a dancer at a travelling fair, slowly paying off a debt there. She's a very close friend (sometimes with, sometimes without benefits) of Madeen and like him and many of the other performers, she was basically sold by one of her own parents. While she doesn't exactly like that fact, she isn't bitter about it either. She loves to travel and see the world, she loves enchanting the audience with her dance, she loves the kind of companionship she has with the other performers. Also, the rather liberal attitude at the fair, since she also loves men and booze. In general, she prefers enjoying the good things in life rather than brooding over the bad ones. Sure, she hopes she'll be free someday and steadily works towards this goal, but at the same time she won't waste her youth and have all the fun she can have. :)
(Though considering that her father was an elf, her "youth" might last anywhere between 30 and 300 years or even more with lucky genes. XD)

Suraya is my OC from my and :iconstarscreamnemesis:'s original RPG.
I used a beautiful reference by :iconsenshistock:.
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Eh eh eh what an alluring pose ! Really great ! I really love how soft the colors makes your drawing looking elegant and comfy. It's a good thing to add some depth, playing with differents plans. But I think that maybe the curtain looks a bit too heavy on this piece, it's like the ceiling is really low and it's making the scene a bit "big" : with this pose we should see how long her legs are, how alluring she is, but it's a bit difficult to not notice the big curtain that just comes like "BROOM I'm here too!". (ahah sorry it's a bit hard for me to explain).I have this feeling mainly because of the top and right part, it's a bit too close from the character I feel.
I like the lamps you did really nice, with a nice touch of light. I like the overwhole lightning, a nice yellow and I certainly love how you did the sheet in front, really nice use of color, it looks really smooth. I feel that the light his emanating a bit too much sometimes (like on some pillows).

I like how you did the light and color, but I have some "problems" with the way you shade, it's a bit too flabby sometimes. Like if you're looking one some pillows it seems like they melt into the sheet, and not that they're on the sheet. The shading is a bit missing on her hair (the one that is on her breast), since the light is coming from the left you should have some (and since you add light on her left hair part too). Oh ! And by the way, I love your hair. It's beautiful ! And the way you blended with the yellow is just amazing. It's just so good, really really good ! You can be really proud of it ! The hair itself made me bug a little behind my screen like "oh wow that's some high quality hair!".
 Her right hand is really good too. I feel like her left arms is a bit cower (don't know if that's really the world), it seems a bit weird because of the front arm. Her stomach is really well made. I feel that her neck is a bit off, too tensed. Her face looks a bit weird because of the pose of her neck. She have a bit a long nose, but hey, I can't really say much because I tend to have this problem too, and because of that often the face is too long. I could strike that in drawing more real face then anime/manga face. But well, like I said it's a BIT, so maybe you don't really have this problem ahah. 

Well, otherwise her right feet cool have more "weight" on the sheet, because of how it looks it's like it's floating and that she's making her leg in the air, all tensed. I feel like she is floating a bit herself because she isn't really lighten on the "bed", you can't really see weight on the fabric, it's a bit too smooth for that.

I like how you did that orange sheet between her legs, it's a nice and sensual add.
Well, it's a really nice drawing, I think you'll really go far. What I said earlier were some ideas to improve, but I already really like what you did (I hope I could convey that ahah). Oh and again, really nice hair !