Olympian Squadron - Deus Zeta

I really like Malcolm's appearance. His headpiece is really cool looking, as well as the straps, golden accents that’re given a different shade to Alton’s, and his axe's sleek but still imposing look.

I also like how, despite there being a description of him in Peyton's profile as not being more different than her and being brash and rebellious, he's still excelled at school like her. I like how he takes a much more aggressive approach than Peyton's in term of a career, too, as he clawed his way up the corporate ladder to get to where he is.

While you do make mention of his superhuman physical characteristics with the mention of him being transformed into an elite fighting machine, I'm really curious as to how he may exercise his ability of mind control, especially given the fact that he's a reincarnation as the God of War. I'm wondering if he might either cause his allies to overflow with confidence or hype, or perhaps he might subvert the idea by simply removing the will to fight him.

I really like his status as the black sheep of the group, alongside his elusive and resistant nature to being part of the team, as well. I also enjoy how he's got a strained relationship with Peyton, harking back to their description as not being more different given how they've got opposing moralities. I do like how, instead of giving him a strong affinity with Miles given his conflict with Peyton to create a further conflict, you instead actually have him find common ground with Daphne and Alton, who sometimes agree with his methods, which I feel makes a greater contrast, if only by subversion of expectation, since they're the other siblings on this team, yet they also both have more positive relationships with Peyton.

Once again, I've really gotta say that you've done some great work, here.