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There is a dream stuck inside of my head
That I do not remember having.The journey for which I long
Seems like it's disseminating.
I am stuck in this bubble of doubt
As his words envelope me in wonder
And his fidgeting makes me want to scream.
These sounds from when I was young still linger
As I am hiding from my worries.
Gentle smiles.
Unrecognizable dreams.
Twisted realities.
Why am I confined in my own doubt?
Why do the corners of his lips strike me with wonderment?
Why does this lengthy journey make me yearn for it so greatly?
I cannot forget this dream.
I cannot forget his smile.
I want to forget this doubt.
Let me forget this doubt.
His words still linger and drown me in wonder.
I am still hiding from this journey.
The wonderment has deceased
And I find myself yearning for this reality.
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Twisted realities
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Okay, so as much as I enjoyed writing this, the editing took me absolutely forever. It just wasn't flowing the way I wanted it to and therefore, I changed it up A LOT. Was so frustrated with this, and I'm still not even sure if it turned out alright xD But it's definitly better than it was at first, lemme tell you that. Still, a little feedback, as always, will be very appreciated, and you guys are always so good at giving me insightful feedback, so thank you ♥
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Okay, so as much as I enjoyed writing this, the editing took me absolutely forever. It just wasn't flowing the way I wanted it to and therefore, I changed it up A LOT. Was so frustrated with this, and I'm still not even sure if it turned out alright xD But it's definitly better than it was at first, lemme tell you that. Still, a little feedback, as always, will be very appreciated, and you guys are always so good at giving me insightful feedback, so thank you ♥
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This poem.... this poem brought tears to my eyes. Jesus Christ. This is absolutely brilliant. Well done my friend. Well done