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FENCES
Dropped from your dam in the lingering dew,
Struggle and stand in the ripening morn.
Suckle her love in a world made anew;
Witness the wonder to which you are born.
Green is the pasture, gentle and bright,
Safe by her side, with a world to explore.
Eager your hooves are, so nimble and light;
And you jump into life - and are hungry for more.
Gallop in glory, the pride of your power,
Sporting and sparring your fellows in fun;
Laughing and larking, for life is in flower,
And love is a prize to be gallantly won.
But now for the fairest your heart is afire;
You rage at your rival with fury ablaze;
Trample and triumph and win your desire,
And you jump into love - and a heavenly haze.
Sobered and saddled with doubts and with duties,
Trot in your track now, and blinker your eyes:
Colts may still quarrel and brawl for their beauties:
Peace is the paradise wished by the wise.
Weary you now in a wilderness wander,
Heavy your hooves are, frail and forlorn;
Black the abyss is, now yawning up yonder,
And you jump -
Dropped from your dam in the lingering dew,
Struggle and stand in the ripening morn.
Suckle her love in a world made anew;
Witness the wonder to which you are born.
Green is the pasture, gentle and bright,
Safe by her side, with a world to explore.
Eager your hooves are, so nimble and light;
And you jump into life - and are hungry for more.
Gallop in glory, the pride of your power,
Sporting and sparring your fellows in fun;
Laughing and larking, for life is in flower,
And love is a prize to be gallantly won.
But now for the fairest your heart is afire;
You rage at your rival with fury ablaze;
Trample and triumph and win your desire,
And you jump into love - and a heavenly haze.
Sobered and saddled with doubts and with duties,
Trot in your track now, and blinker your eyes:
Colts may still quarrel and brawl for their beauties:
Peace is the paradise wished by the wise.
Weary you now in a wilderness wander,
Heavy your hooves are, frail and forlorn;
Black the abyss is, now yawning up yonder,
And you jump -
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A poem I had been contemplating for some years now, of a life cycle for a centaur (it could, of course, apply equally to other equines). Dactylic meter was the natural choice. 7@=e
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Very moving and beautiful... I... don't like the ending, did Updike's work prompt it? But I have offered a piece of my own in response.