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SFDI - Starting Off - Transcript

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*The contestants assemble in a group, each mumbling questions to themselves.*

Saw: So, where will we begin first, David?

Naily: I don't know, but there could be traps anywhere. There are bombs everywhere. There are lifeless bodies everywhere-

Taco: Naily. We get it.

David: So... according to me... We should proceed to Goiky Canal first.

8-Ball: What, you aren't making us a boat for everyone?

David: Of course not. We have to search around it.

Book: That's right. If we want to fix something, it's tools that we need. And I think there are just some here, hidden or not.

Clock: Heh, it's not like me. I fall to the water. I'm terminated. Do you guys want that?

Taco: Dude. It's survival, not relax on a beach and do something.

Clock: Well, it can be your problem, too!

David: Guys, let's not misuse any time so that we can go to Goiky Canal.

*They all go near Goiky Canal, searching for tools*

Dora: Has anyone found something yet?

8-Ball: No. Just junk around. What else?

Book: I just found a screwdriver and nails, okay?

Naily: That's not okay. We have found only 2 things, and that's it?! Let's go search underwater or something, or else we’ll die for good.

David: *pulls out an unusual old boat* How about we use this kind of boat to pass? We may discover more stuff on the other side!

Taco: Fine, but let's put one-quarter of us here, then that's it.

David: Alright then. I'll judge who goes on the other side of Goiky Canal.

*After some thinking, David has chosen 8-Ball, Clock, Taco, Saw, Dora, Book, Naily, Lollipop, Gaty and Balloony.*

Clock: It's a bit troublesome to fit in, but seems okay I guess.

Balloony: Let's go then! It could be a great treasure.

*Then, they all go to the other side of Goiky Canal. Meanwhile..*

Pie: Hey guys! I found a map! It includes about Goiky Canal and other regions...

Marker: Well, that's weird. Why would someone leave a map here for an obscure reason?

Pie: I don't know. But look! We could travel to these, but we don't have a car and those names...

Eggy: Well, we'll take care of those later. Search more tools, okay?

Fanny: Blablabla, stop talking about something and concentrate.

*Meanwhile, back on the boat, it appears that a lot of wind is going on, and it's not easy.*

Book: Watch out... and don't fall!

Clock: Of course, but we aren't at a mountain.

David: Well, a bit longer, and we'll get through.

Balloony: *hears something cracking from the boat* Uh, guys? I think the ship is going to break.

Book: No, it's resistant as a rock.

Taco: You think?! Look at the mass and volume! It could be harmful indeed!

*But no one noticed 8-Ball is about to fall, and it's a grave mistake.*

8-Ball: Hey! Can someone help me get back on board?!

Taco: *finally notices 8-Ball* Don’t worry! I'll help!

*Taco tries lifting 8-Ball back on the boat, but it failed.*

Taco: You're too heavy!

Book: *runs to 8-Ball* I'm here! We'll save you, 8-Ball!

8-Ball: Okay, but quick! I can't swim, because I’m limbless!

*They lifted him, but when they wanted to put 8-Ball back, the wind slipped him back from Book and Taco's hands, which made him fall into the icy cold water to his presumed death*

Taco: 8-Ball! Nooooooo!

Book: Well... we did our best... but it can't be changed.

Balloony: *is with David* What happened?

Book: Something tragic. 8-Ball fell and sunk into the deep water, even if we helped him!

David: Uh oh. So it starts here...

Clock: Aaand we've almost arrived.

Balloony: Alright, that’s cool.

Taco: I mean, could anything worse happen this time?

Book: I don't know. Maybe. But so far, I’m not sure.

*But a water wave starts to soak Clock, but he stays fine... or does he?*

Clock: Oh well, *sdffd!* I think it's resistant for a bit. *dfgg!*

Taco: Um, Clock? Are you okay?

Clock: Pfft, *dgvfd!* it's nothing.

David: We've hit, guys!

Balloony: Ah, we are here! But it's interesting.

Book: Yep. And this time it will be different.

Taco: I hope so! But let's not forget the deaths if there are more of these.

*David and the others go to search on the other side. Meanwhile...*

Gaty: Well, we found only five things, but we'll review them later. Also, Lollipop, what was the problem?

Lollipop: Nothing personal. Okay?

Pie: We gotta figure out more about the map, maybe...

Fries: Hmhm, I don't know what the others are searching about, but to be honest, I have an ill feeling about this.

Tree: I don't know, but if you say so, okay then.
UPDATE: Just opened up critiques! Feel free to write one whenever you feel like it!
UPDATE 2: This script was now rewritten by NummiKitti!
Special thanks to OfficialLeafy for writing the script!

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Okay, this is the edgiest of all BFDI Series, I mean, I am a filler writer but Sugar, the story plot was good, it would be cool if this show did get animated.
The only thing I didn't like was 8-Ball dying, most of the BFDI contestants died (even tho it was an older episode. Everything else I liked. I can't say more but no thanks to the stupid 100 word limit then I might have to say more...
Well this is a genre twist indeed, instead of being funny, weird it's dark and edgy around the recommended characters and BFDIA characters including David.

(This is really bad imao)