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*The contestants assemble in a group, each mumbling questions to themselves.*
Saw: So, where will we begin first, David?
Naily: I don't know, but there could be traps anywhere. There are bombs everywhere. There are lifeless bodies everywhere-
Taco: Naily. We get it.
David: So... according to me... We should proceed to Goiky Canal first.
8-Ball: What, you aren't making us a boat for everyone?
David: Of course not. We have to search around it.
Book: That's right. If we want to fix something, it's tools that we need. And I think there are just some here, hidden or not.
Clock: Heh, it's not like me. I fall to the water. I'm terminated. Do you guys want that?
Taco: Dude. It's survival, not relax on a beach and do something.
Clock: Well, it can be your problem, too!
David: Guys, let's not misuse any time so that we can go to Goiky Canal.
*They all go near Goiky Canal, searching for tools*
Dora: Has anyone found something yet?
8-Ball: No. Just junk around. What else?
Book: I just found a screwdriver and nails, okay?
Naily: That's not okay. We have found only 2 things, and that's it?! Let's go search underwater or something, or else we’ll die for good.
David: *pulls out an unusual old boat* How about we use this kind of boat to pass? We may discover more stuff on the other side!
Taco: Fine, but let's put one-quarter of us here, then that's it.
David: Alright then. I'll judge who goes on the other side of Goiky Canal.
*After some thinking, David has chosen 8-Ball, Clock, Taco, Saw, Dora, Book, Naily, Lollipop, Gaty and Balloony.*
Clock: It's a bit troublesome to fit in, but seems okay I guess.
Balloony: Let's go then! It could be a great treasure.
*Then, they all go to the other side of Goiky Canal. Meanwhile..*
Pie: Hey guys! I found a map! It includes about Goiky Canal and other regions...
Marker: Well, that's weird. Why would someone leave a map here for an obscure reason?
Pie: I don't know. But look! We could travel to these, but we don't have a car and those names...
Eggy: Well, we'll take care of those later. Search more tools, okay?
Fanny: Blablabla, stop talking about something and concentrate.
*Meanwhile, back on the boat, it appears that a lot of wind is going on, and it's not easy.*
Book: Watch out... and don't fall!
Clock: Of course, but we aren't at a mountain.
David: Well, a bit longer, and we'll get through.
Balloony: *hears something cracking from the boat* Uh, guys? I think the ship is going to break.
Book: No, it's resistant as a rock.
Taco: You think?! Look at the mass and volume! It could be harmful indeed!
*But no one noticed 8-Ball is about to fall, and it's a grave mistake.*
8-Ball: Hey! Can someone help me get back on board?!
Taco: *finally notices 8-Ball* Don’t worry! I'll help!
*Taco tries lifting 8-Ball back on the boat, but it failed.*
Taco: You're too heavy!
Book: *runs to 8-Ball* I'm here! We'll save you, 8-Ball!
8-Ball: Okay, but quick! I can't swim, because I’m limbless!
*They lifted him, but when they wanted to put 8-Ball back, the wind slipped him back from Book and Taco's hands, which made him fall into the icy cold water to his presumed death*
Taco: 8-Ball! Nooooooo!
Book: Well... we did our best... but it can't be changed.
Balloony: *is with David* What happened?
Book: Something tragic. 8-Ball fell and sunk into the deep water, even if we helped him!
David: Uh oh. So it starts here...
Clock: Aaand we've almost arrived.
Balloony: Alright, that’s cool.
Taco: I mean, could anything worse happen this time?
Book: I don't know. Maybe. But so far, I’m not sure.
*But a water wave starts to soak Clock, but he stays fine... or does he?*
Clock: Oh well, *sdffd!* I think it's resistant for a bit. *dfgg!*
Taco: Um, Clock? Are you okay?
Clock: Pfft, *dgvfd!* it's nothing.
David: We've hit, guys!
Balloony: Ah, we are here! But it's interesting.
Book: Yep. And this time it will be different.
Taco: I hope so! But let's not forget the deaths if there are more of these.
*David and the others go to search on the other side. Meanwhile...*
Gaty: Well, we found only five things, but we'll review them later. Also, Lollipop, what was the problem?
Lollipop: Nothing personal. Okay?
Pie: We gotta figure out more about the map, maybe...
Fries: Hmhm, I don't know what the others are searching about, but to be honest, I have an ill feeling about this.
Tree: I don't know, but if you say so, okay then.
Saw: So, where will we begin first, David?
Naily: I don't know, but there could be traps anywhere. There are bombs everywhere. There are lifeless bodies everywhere-
Taco: Naily. We get it.
David: So... according to me... We should proceed to Goiky Canal first.
8-Ball: What, you aren't making us a boat for everyone?
David: Of course not. We have to search around it.
Book: That's right. If we want to fix something, it's tools that we need. And I think there are just some here, hidden or not.
Clock: Heh, it's not like me. I fall to the water. I'm terminated. Do you guys want that?
Taco: Dude. It's survival, not relax on a beach and do something.
Clock: Well, it can be your problem, too!
David: Guys, let's not misuse any time so that we can go to Goiky Canal.
*They all go near Goiky Canal, searching for tools*
Dora: Has anyone found something yet?
8-Ball: No. Just junk around. What else?
Book: I just found a screwdriver and nails, okay?
Naily: That's not okay. We have found only 2 things, and that's it?! Let's go search underwater or something, or else we’ll die for good.
David: *pulls out an unusual old boat* How about we use this kind of boat to pass? We may discover more stuff on the other side!
Taco: Fine, but let's put one-quarter of us here, then that's it.
David: Alright then. I'll judge who goes on the other side of Goiky Canal.
*After some thinking, David has chosen 8-Ball, Clock, Taco, Saw, Dora, Book, Naily, Lollipop, Gaty and Balloony.*
Clock: It's a bit troublesome to fit in, but seems okay I guess.
Balloony: Let's go then! It could be a great treasure.
*Then, they all go to the other side of Goiky Canal. Meanwhile..*
Pie: Hey guys! I found a map! It includes about Goiky Canal and other regions...
Marker: Well, that's weird. Why would someone leave a map here for an obscure reason?
Pie: I don't know. But look! We could travel to these, but we don't have a car and those names...
Eggy: Well, we'll take care of those later. Search more tools, okay?
Fanny: Blablabla, stop talking about something and concentrate.
*Meanwhile, back on the boat, it appears that a lot of wind is going on, and it's not easy.*
Book: Watch out... and don't fall!
Clock: Of course, but we aren't at a mountain.
David: Well, a bit longer, and we'll get through.
Balloony: *hears something cracking from the boat* Uh, guys? I think the ship is going to break.
Book: No, it's resistant as a rock.
Taco: You think?! Look at the mass and volume! It could be harmful indeed!
*But no one noticed 8-Ball is about to fall, and it's a grave mistake.*
8-Ball: Hey! Can someone help me get back on board?!
Taco: *finally notices 8-Ball* Don’t worry! I'll help!
*Taco tries lifting 8-Ball back on the boat, but it failed.*
Taco: You're too heavy!
Book: *runs to 8-Ball* I'm here! We'll save you, 8-Ball!
8-Ball: Okay, but quick! I can't swim, because I’m limbless!
*They lifted him, but when they wanted to put 8-Ball back, the wind slipped him back from Book and Taco's hands, which made him fall into the icy cold water to his presumed death*
Taco: 8-Ball! Nooooooo!
Book: Well... we did our best... but it can't be changed.
Balloony: *is with David* What happened?
Book: Something tragic. 8-Ball fell and sunk into the deep water, even if we helped him!
David: Uh oh. So it starts here...
Clock: Aaand we've almost arrived.
Balloony: Alright, that’s cool.
Taco: I mean, could anything worse happen this time?
Book: I don't know. Maybe. But so far, I’m not sure.
*But a water wave starts to soak Clock, but he stays fine... or does he?*
Clock: Oh well, *sdffd!* I think it's resistant for a bit. *dfgg!*
Taco: Um, Clock? Are you okay?
Clock: Pfft, *dgvfd!* it's nothing.
David: We've hit, guys!
Balloony: Ah, we are here! But it's interesting.
Book: Yep. And this time it will be different.
Taco: I hope so! But let's not forget the deaths if there are more of these.
*David and the others go to search on the other side. Meanwhile...*
Gaty: Well, we found only five things, but we'll review them later. Also, Lollipop, what was the problem?
Lollipop: Nothing personal. Okay?
Pie: We gotta figure out more about the map, maybe...
Fries: Hmhm, I don't know what the others are searching about, but to be honest, I have an ill feeling about this.
Tree: I don't know, but if you say so, okay then.
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Okay, this is the edgiest of all BFDI Series, I mean, I am a filler writer but Sugar, the story plot was good, it would be cool if this show did get animated.
The only thing I didn't like was 8-Ball dying, most of the BFDI contestants died (even tho it was an older episode. Everything else I liked. I can't say more but no thanks to the stupid 100 word limit then I might have to say more...
Well this is a genre twist indeed, instead of being funny, weird it's dark and edgy around the recommended characters and BFDIA characters including David.
(This is really bad imao)