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what you see
is your heart

-heart-

relentlessly
beating

-beat-

how fast or slow
does it all flow?

-beat-

back
&
forth

-beat-

what feeling 
stains,
what emotion 
colours

-baet-

do you understand
the power
of
a vision?
it relates to its vastness

-atbe-

its texture &
consistency

-taeb-

availability
& desire

- t a e b -

do you know the
strength of a heart?

-   t  a  e  b  -

chances
are

-       t      a      e      b    -

you
do


NaPoWriMo 21

honestly, I don't know how happy I am with this, but I am glad it isn't depressive
I'm in a state where I could write some real dark shit
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286yoha's avatar
Haaaaahhh
I disagree with you on that one ><
This is one of my favorites, you should be really proud of it ;-;
BE PROUD OF IT THAT'S AN ORDER!!


I've been having so many heart issues, I'd suddenly lose the abillity to breathe or move and all I can do is lay down and enjoy my heartbeats and study the changes in them, I really love this piece it doesn't feel as heavy as some of your works, it's just as deep but feels light and easily flows...
Maybe that's just me x.x
My personal humble opinion~~~