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Grave

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“He was always headed to an early grave,”
They whispered gravely, dressed in black
As they approached his grave site.

Beside a resting casket and a hole, there’s a gravestone
With engraved letters reading,
“From the cradle to the grave, forever loved, Our Dave.”
His mother had chosen it, gravely assured
That having had one foot in the grave while living
Would not define his grave in death.

“Upon my son’s grave, I never would have thought…”
She choked, releasing the gravest cry,
But he was turning in his grave beside.
“He dug his own grave with the way he behaved.”
But on a day so grave, there were no words they could say
And when the graveyard held just her.
Knowing she’d take her secret to the grave, she smirked.
I wrote a spooky slinky poem! If you don't know what a slinky poem is, check it out here --> (Some really cool things)

I have to admit this was tricky because there are only so many ways you can use the word "Grave" - hopefully I was able to mix it up enough that the repetition doesn't feel too overbearing. :)
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BluJayPlayer's avatar
I've never heard of a slinky poem. Sorry to say, I'm not sure it's a style I can get into, just a personal preference. I certainly appreciate the creative ways needed to pull this off, and you did it way better than I imagine most would, but that requirement just sorta pulls me out of it.

Still, I loved the lines, "That having had one foot in the grave while living / Would not define his grave in death."