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EOTS - pg.1 - Train of Thoughts

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Juhhwlqjv!
The promised first page has arrived into the DA station! Have fun reading, perceiving, decoding, discussing. Just leave the "cussing" out of "discussing", please;) (Wink)

I'd be happy to receive constructive comments and critiques. For an instance, have I captured the twins' voices? Could I make any lines shorter/longer/funnier? Things like that always help:) 

ps: See the writing on the other side of the paper Mabel's holding? I figured it might be kinda too small and faded to read, so if you can't make it out, here - have a transcript: "sv wkh ode lv brxuv wloo zh uhwxuq"

Bullet; Blue next page: fav.me/dcx5nc5

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters nor scenery. They belong to the genius mind behing Gravity Falls, Alex Hirsch. The backstory of this story belongs to the show. The story that happens from now on is the product of my and my sister's imagination.

edit 15.1.2019: Uploaded a new version with the speech hopefully more readable than it had been though I hadn't made the narration boxes 100% opaque. Fixed the cipher in this description, too. Thanks to lutias for pointing out the mistake there and for offering much needed and appreciated advice. I'll do another, more detailed upload at a later date, but for now i'm going to move on the next page.
1.2.2019: Finally found a way to upload the pages in their full size. Hope it works out. Wish me luck, and please don't get mad when this piece will have popped up in your inbox for the third time already.
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I like how you did the background