File #5: My Composing Dream (Part 7/12)

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Other Person's Response:  I agree.  If there's a life that would hold the greatest amount of beauty and goodness, then that's the better life to live.  That's the more meaningful existence. 

My Reply:  Yes.  That's why I think there should be an eternal, blissful afterlife of our dreams.  If it doesn't exist, and this is the only life we have, then scientists should really work on trying to make us immortal.

Other Person's Response:  If life just went on and on, then it would be a life that holds less beauty and worth, even if said life was a paradise.

My Reply:  It's still possible to have the most profoundly beautiful thoughts regarding a life that drags on and on.  Therefore, even an eternal, blissful life can still be the most profoundly beautiful and worthwhile existence for you.  I know it would for me.  So, I disagree with your statement.

Other Person's Response:  If you had some fatal condition right now, and the doctor told you that you only had a few weeks to live, would you give up composing?   

My Reply:  I'm afraid so.  There's no way I can achieve my goal within such a short time period.  Since I can only compose just for the sake of composing, then I'd give up.  That's another reason why I've bought these Immortality Rings because they are said to keep your body healthy and alive by preventing diseases, and stopping aging.  If these rings work, then they would allow me to fully go through with my goal. 

That is, if some fatal accident doesn't happen to me because the rings won't protect me from that.  Also, even if I did manage to achieve my goal, but my music got little to no praise, then I'd give up, too.  This is because I wouldn't be creating any good music and, thus, I'd see it as being pointless to pursue composing any further.  If I try and try to improve, but my music is never that great, then I'd officially give up composing. 

Other Person's Response:  So, your only goal in composing is to hog all the glory and attention, and feel good from that?  That makes you a leeching bastard!  I'm sorry, but that's plain selfish!  If you really do have an autistic gift that has yet to be conveyed to the world, that gift can be used for something better than what you intend to use it for.

My Reply:  I'll take what I want in life, and I don't care what anyone's attitude or opinion is!  Like I said, only my own views and opinions matter to me.  I see nothing wrong with seeking praise and recognition of my music.  As I said before, I don't care about the standards of others, and only my own standards matter to me. 

According to the standards of others, I wouldn't be a decent human being, and I would be composing for a wrong, selfish purpose.  But, according to my standard, I'm a decent human being, and me seeking praise and recognition of my music would be nothing wrong.

Other Person's Response:  Why must you share your works to others?  A field of art can be appreciated just as it is.  You can make music simply because you want to do it.  I make artistic crafts because it means something to me.  If my works get shared to the world, then that's just a bonus.  It's not my main reason for making crafts.  That's why it doesn't bother me if my works never get shared to the world.

My Reply:  The whole point of expressing yourself through art is to express yourself to others.  Imagine if there was a very cool, awesome dude, and he had some awesome attributes, such as cool clothes, a cool personality, etc.  If he lived a solitary life, then he'd never get the chance to express these attributes to others.  Thus, his cool attributes would never be known to the world.  That's why he needs to meet people, and express himself to others.

I realize there are cool attributes about me that I could express to others, such as my casual, polite personality.  But, there's something greater within me that I have yet to express to the world.  I have some awesome, profound, and powerful emotions to express to others through music.  It's my mission that I achieve this goal.  I don't want said greatness to be confined.  I want it expressed to the world.  Once people realize said greatness, they should be astonished.  

Other Person's Response:  Do you express your cool attributes to the world?  If not, then why be concerned about expressing yourself musically to the world?  Why not compose for its own sake?

My Reply:  I'm not concerned about expressing my attributes such, as the clothes I wear, and how I behave.  This is because I'm not concerned about that.  Those are personal things to me, and I don't care if the world praises, and recognizes them or not.  It would be like how a person doesn't care if his preferences are shared to the world. 

But, there's one thing I wish to express to the world, and that would be my music.  If I create awesome music, that would definitely be worth sharing.  But, things, such as the clothes I wear, and how I behave, are basic things that I don't care about sharing to others.  Besides, there are emotions that I can only express through art that I can't express as an individual.

Other Person's Response:  I really think you need to appreciate composing for its own sake, rather than composing to get what you want out of it.

My Reply:  When people manufacture products, they don't make products just to make them.  They do it to make an awesome product that's promising to the customers.  Some people make awful products that don't work, and some people make products just to make them.  But, that's beside the point.  The point I'm trying to make here is that, if I'm going to make some music, then it has to be awesome music that delivers to the audience.  It must be known, praised, and given good ratings.  I'm not going to make music just to make music.

Other Person's Response:  I know there are people out there who can't appreciate good products.  So, even if you do make some awesome music later on, some people might not appreciate it.

My Reply:  I agree.  Not everyone is going to think a given melody, theme, or song is great.  Likewise, there are some great products out there, and not everyone's going to think said products are great.

Other Person's Response:  When creating music for the audience to listen to, don't stop at any given point in the crafting process, say your music is good enough, and that the audience just needs to lower their standards, so they can appreciate it.  Make sure you create a fully crafted melody, theme, or song that delivers.

My Reply:  Sure.  But, as long as I create an awesome melody, theme, or song, and its power and greatness has been successfully conveyed, then the audience should appreciate that.  If further improvements are needed, then the audience should kindly point them out, rather than dismissing and not appreciating the power and greatness that's already there.  Just because a work of art needs some improvement doesn't mean it's not a good, beautiful, or great work of art, and that it holds very little to no profound meaning.  It would simply be a great work of art that needs some improvement to make it even more great. 

So, when people witness great works of art that need some improvement, they should praise these works while, at the same time, offering constructive criticism.  Just offering constructive criticism without the praise isn't fair.  Saying the work of art isn't good because it needs improvement just isn't fair.  But, offering nothing but praise for a work of art without any constructive criticism isn't fair either.  So, you should offer both praise (if the artwork is deserving of it) and constructive criticism (if the artwork needs it). 

However, there are works of art that don't need any constructive criticism because they're at their peak of perfection.  For these works of art, we'd just give them praise.  But, there are some people who wouldn't like these works of art because it's just not their style.  For example, some people wouldn't like Beethoven's music.  That's alright because different people will have different styles of music, drawings, paintings, etc. they prefer.  Then, there are works of art that deserve constructive criticism, but are unworthy of any praise.  An example of these types of artwork would be tunes plucked out, on a keyboard, by a baby.   

Other Person's Response:  So, you'd actually have 2 main goals when it comes to composing:

1.)  To produce some awesome music, and have it known and praised.

2.)  To feel happiness and joy in pursuing #1, and achieving #1.

My Reply:  Correct.  #1 without #2 would be a worthless endeavor.  But, even if I could feel happiness and joy in the absence of #1, I still wouldn't bother composing because I wouldn't be able to create good music, and have it known and praised by the world.  That's why a combination of #1 and #2 is needed.

Other Person's Response:  Honestly, achieving your goals shouldn't really matter because, once you die, that's it.  Your compositions will never become legend, and they'll be forgotten. 

My Reply:  Well, this might not be the only life, and there might be some grand purpose or meaning to life.  That being the case, achieving my goals would matter.  This would mean my works wouldn't just waste away.  Now, if I did learn that this was the only life, then achieving my goals would still matter to me.  It wouldn't matter to me as much though.  Why would it still matter to me?  Because I still wish to achieve goals anyway.  I bet Stephen Hawking's goals, or Beethoven's goals, would still matter to them, even if they were convinced this was the only life they had.

Other Person's Response:  Why go through all the trouble of trying to compose awesome music?  Why not just wait until your soul goes to the afterlife?  You would then be bestowed with the ability to magically and instantly transform your inner emotions into music for other souls to listen to.

My Reply:  This could be the only life though.  There might be no soul or afterlife.  In which case, I must live the longest life I can here on Earth, and I must compose awesome music the hard way through education and training.  I have purchased Immortality Rings, and I hope they work to make me live a long, Earthly life. 

Other Person's Response:  What if it turns out these tunes you're hearing in your mind really are as great as you say they are?

My Reply:  Since my claim that these tunes I'm hearing in my mind were great tunes was a true claim I was making all along, then other people should really keep an open mind to my other claim, which was that positive emotions are the only things that make life good and beautiful.

As I said before, I have autism, and autistic people have great insight into themselves, and their own personal experience.  Many discover new ideas that humanity was blind to, and in denial of.  If you don't believe I have autism, then go ask my mother, and she will tell you.

Other Person's Response:  You don't have to create good, emotionally powerful music.  You can just create music because you like to do it as a hobby.

My Reply:  My whole goal in making music is to create music that's great, unheard of, and emotionally powerful or profound.  To me, it's not about the craft itself.  Even if I made the most artistically crafted song, but said song only conveyed a bland, unattractive emotion, then that craft wasn't something to be proud of.  Think of the lame music you hear on the radio.  From there, imagine a well-crafted version of that.  It would still be lame music.  So, to me, music is all about that emotionally powerful, profound greatness.  Without that, then I've failed my mission as a composer.

Other Person's Response:  Are you expecting to be as great as Beethoven?

My Reply:  No.  I just want to create music that's awesome, catchy, and emotionally powerful or profound.  It would be like music for video games or anime.  When you hear theme songs for characters in popular anime or video games, they're often something catchy, awesome, bad ass, and emotionally epic or dramatic.  That's the style of music I'm going for.  However, it's something much more bizarre than that.

Other Person's Response:  Are you trying to be the better composer than anyone else?

My Reply:  No.  The type of praise and recognition I'm seeking isn't the type that the person with the biggest muscles, the best stunts, or the greatest intellect would receive.  It's the type that a person with a unique and awesome, artistic vision, or craft, would receive.

Other Person's Response:  Do you wish to go to college and go into a music business?

My Reply:  No.  I'm much better off learning at home and composing that way.  I can learn all I need to learn online.  It would just be a waste of money, when I could've become a good composer at home.  Besides, I wish to pursue composing as a hobby, and not as a career. 

Other Person's Response:  Wouldn't you feel positive emotions from inspiring others through your music?  Do you only feel positive emotions when others compliment your music?

My Reply:  I don't feel inspired or driven to inspire and help others in general, or through my music.  Although, I'd feel positive emotions from having inspired others, and giving them something good to listen to.  So, in the process of me feeling positive emotions from making music, and having my music praised, I'd also feel positive emotions from others being inspired through my music.  Right now, I can't share any good music, since I have to learn how to create good music. 

Other Person's Response:  Do you wish to be a performer?

My Reply:  No.  I have a keyboard, and all I want to do is use it to figure out these notes I'm hearing in my head.  I do not plan on performing my music, or any other type of music.  I figure out the notes on the keyboard, and place them on a music notation software.  From there, I'd use music producing software to choose better instruments for them.

Other Person's Response:  We as human beings project meaning upon things all the time.  Even meaningless things become meaningful to us.  It's quite possible you're projecting certain meanings upon these tunes in your head, which are actually gibberish tunes.  If I were to write down a series of randomly placed notes, then I bet you'd report to me that this "melody" conveys something.

My Reply:  I performed this little experiment on myself, where I placed a bunch of random notes down, and listened to them.  I still perceived the "melody" as random gibberish.  So, it's quite possible I really am creating tunes in my mind that are catchy and amazing.

However, if I were to somehow perceive that random melody as conveying something meaningful and catchy, then it's quite possible my brain is creating a different tune from that, which would be a tune that does convey something meaningful and catchy. 

My brain might be trying to make sense of that random melody and, in order for my brain to do that, then it has to create a melody out of that random mess, which would be a meaningful, catchy melody.

Other Person's Response:  You have to give me evidence that you're instinctively creating great tunes in your head.  Otherwise, I'm not going to believe you.

My Reply:  In the past, I've sung my tunes on the microphone, since I didn't have a keyboard at the time.  But, I don't know how to sing.  When people listened to them, they said they were awful.  But, I knew all along the good tunes I was really trying to convey, even though people didn't get them. 

There was one person who has conveyed these tunes for me.  These are just 3 tunes here.  The instrument choice this guy has chosen for my tunes is different than the ones I had in my head.  But, the 1st two tunes are very close to what I intended to convey. 

So, he got those 2 tunes right, for the most part.  If anyone thinks these tunes are good and catchy, then I think that's evidence, right there, that I'm creating great, catchy tunes in my mind.  These tunes of mine you hear in this video aren't my best ones. 

I've created powerful, amazing tunes in my head that I have yet to convey myself.  But, for now, here are these tunes of mine I'll share to you.  When you watch this video, you hear my voice singing, along with instruments the guy has chosen. 

Also, scroll down to the comments section below in this video, and you'll see that it really is me.  A person mentions my name in the comments section.  He/she says:  "I'M SORRY I DOUBTED YOU MATT! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"  So, here's the video:

youtu.be/IuTvz0yBoFE    

Other Person's Response:  I'm sorry.  Yes, your tunes that this guy conveyed for you are catchy.  But, they're nothing good.

My Reply:  If those tunes are catchy, then that's something worth praising and appreciating.  It says that I'm creating catchy tunes in my head, and that should be enough, right there, to appreciate for now.  Too many people complain, and they don't appreciate the beautiful, amazing, good things in life. 

If a work of art has good qualities, but many bad qualities, then many people complain, and call the whole work of art awful when, in fact, there are still good qualities about that artwork worth appreciating.  Sure, constructive criticism is needed in order for a person to improve.  But, such criticism shouldn't dismiss the good qualities of an artwork worth appreciating. 

So, yes, those tunes might be awful in certain regards.  But, if they're still catchy tunes, and convey scenes, then that's a good quality worth praising and appreciating.  Even the people in the comments section of the video appreciate this.  Therefore, a fair assessment of my tunes would be something like:

"Man, those tunes are awful in certain areas!  But, wow, they're catchy and convey scenes!  I see great potential in you as a composer.  But, these specific areas still need improvement."

This would really be no different than if someone was a dancer, and there were some judges.  If the dancer had good form, but poor timing, then his good form was something worth praising and appreciating.  From there, his timing should be criticized.  But, to say that this dancer is awful, and has no talent, would be an unfair assessment, since that would be leaving out things worth appreciating.    

Other Person's Response:  Who are you to say things like this?  You're an insult to musicians everywhere!

My Reply:  The truth is often times insulting, and I'll not hold back from expressing the truth. 

Other Person's Response:  Those tunes in that video aren't even worth appreciating, since they're nothing catchy or good.

My Reply:  I think I might have a difficult time telling the difference between the real good, catchy tunes I hear in my mind, as opposed to what's been produced in reality.  So, from my perspective, the tunes in that video are the real, good, catchy ones I had in my mind all along. 

But, perhaps they're really not, which is the reason why other people say they're not good or catchy when they listen to them.  Or, maybe, they are good and catchy, and you're just having too high of a standard when it comes to what you deem as a good or catchy tune, theme, or song. 

After all, many people liked the video, there weren't that many dislikes, and all the people in the comments section loved these tunes.  So, I think this clearly shows you're having too high of a standard.  I really love people like the ones in the comment section, who are able to appreciate and praise works of art that deserve appreciation and praise. 

Again, I do agree with the idea that constructive criticism should be offered in addition to praise.  But, I don't agree that constructive criticism should completely overshadow any praise that's deserved, and neither do I agree that praise should completely overshadow any constructive criticism.  People should also keep their standards at a reasonable level and not so high that they can't appreciate things.

Other Person's Response:  In regards to standards, I think it's best to have a high musical standard, and to not settle for a moderate standard.  This will compel a person to be the best composer he can be.

My Reply:  I think it's best to have a moderate standard while, at the same time, encouraging a composer to be the best he can be.  Such a standard would leave a person saying something such as:

"Those tunes of yours really are good and catchy!  I really love them, and find them unique!  I see great potential in you, and I'd love to see you at your best!"

As you can see here, having a moderate standard can still encourage a person to be the best he can be, while also leaving plenty of room for appreciation and praise.  It doesn't demand growth, but simply offers it up as encouraging advice.  But, having a high standard, like you're suggesting, may encourage a person to be at his best.  But, it leaves little to no room for praise and appreciation.

A moderate standard leaves room for praise of works of art that meet both a moderate standard, and a high standard.  But, a high standard only leaves room for praise of works of art that meet a high standard.  I realize a low standard would leave room for praise of works of art that meet a low standard, a moderate standard, and a high standard.  But, the goal is to have a reasonable standard, and I think that standard would be the moderate standard.  It's neither too high nor too low.

So, a high standard leaves too much room for criticism, and little room for praise and appreciation, while a low standard leaves too much room for praise, and little room for criticism.  That's why I think the moderate standard is the right standard to have.  It's the fair standard to have, which makes the low and high standards unfair.  In my opinion, I think the moderate standard should be the universal standard everyone should agree upon.

Other Person's Response:  That doesn't justify disregarding valid criticism, just because you don't receive praise as well.

My Reply:  I agree constructive criticism should be offered, and taken into consideration, even if it's offered without the praise.  All I'm saying here is that it's unfair for a person to just offer criticism, without the praise, or praise without the criticism.

Other Person's Response:  That's an opinion that you're entitled to.  Don't consider it factual though.

My Reply:  I'll just give an example to show how it's unfair and insulting.  For example, if someone on American Idol sang quite well with some flaws, then if Simon Cowell just displayed his rude attitude, and only offered criticism, then that would be plain rude and unfair.  However, if he also offered the praise that was deserved, then that would be the right thing to do.

Other Person's Response:  You only give praise when you can really find anything good about something. You don't just praise whatever you see to make the creator happy. You praise something to let the creator know of what's positive in a certain art piece, and let them know what to keep in, and what to improve, or leave out.

Always expect feedback.  But, don't expect people to just shower it with praise, or bombard it with criticism. You can only know about people's opinions, once they've provided feedback.  Before said feedback is provided, you have the right to judge your own works of art however you want.  However, you can't impose your opinion on everyone else.

You just might like different things people here do, and that's ok, honestly, as long as you don't complain about our standards by saying they're "too high."  They're are different.  But, not necessarily high.  I don't know how to talk anymore.  I shouldn't keep talking to no avail.

My Reply:  People can have a different style of comedy, or music, which prevents them from appreciating the greatness of certain types of comedy, or music.  So, having a high standard isn't the only thing that prevents people from praising and appreciating works of art.  As for standards though, I think the moderate standard should be the universally agreed upon standard because, like I said before, it's neither too high, nor too low.  It's just right.

Other Person's Response:  Well, unfortunately, that renders basically your whole post moot because no one is going to have the exact same standards you have that you consider "moderate standards," as that's really subjective.  You might as well not have shared this packet at all if this is the basis for all your responses to people's posts.

My Reply:  I thought there was a low, moderate, and high standard that was objective because I thought there was a way to objectively determine what works of art are good, magnificent, bad, or horrendous.  If these objective standards don't yet exist, and it's currently subjective, then surely there must be a way to objectively determine them.

Other Person's Response:  When you naturally create music in your head, having no knowledge of how music works, you won't create any good music that expresses what you want to express to the audience.  But, having much knowledge in composing, you can naturally create such music.  At first, you will have to put much thought into creating music when you're first learning how to do it.  That's because there are rules to follow, and things to take into consideration.  But, over time, you'll naturally create good music. 

My Reply:  I hope I can naturally create good music that expresses what I want to express then.  I hope I can achieve this goal someday.  People might tell me to give up composing right now, since I'm no good at it.  But, I'll only give up when I'm absolutely sure that I can't achieve my goal of creating the music I want to create.

Other Person's Response:  Could you explain why composing means so much to you?

My Reply:  I'll explain.  First of all, music is just what means so much to me.  Simply put.  Secondly, all other forms of art are quiet.  They don't make noise.  For example, if an author has written a good story, or if a painter has created an awesome painting, then the other person would just have to look at the painting, or read the story.  But, music is different because you could blast the stereo or computer speakers. 

I'd consider music to, thus, be a more potent form of art.  It's more loud and impulsive than other forms of art.  It seems to be more expressive than, say, a story or painting that quietly sits there, waiting for the audience to read it, or look at it.  Music gets right in your ears.  It's like a person screaming into your ears. 

If it was a calm, relaxing song, then it would be like someone speaking gently to you.  My point is, music speaks or screams, while all other forms of art are quiet.  Sure, other forms of art do speak, or scream, in their own way (which would technically classify them as "noisy" works of art in their own, unique way).  But, music is just what means so much to me. 

I think it's a fact that many people prefer music over other art forms.  If you ask many people, I bet they'd tell you they'd prefer to listen to some loud, awesome music, than to sit or stand there, reading an awesome story, or looking at an awesome painting.  For me, music is the greater form of art, since it triggers the greater emotional response within me than other art forms.

Actually, it would be having a combination of sound, music, imagery, and story that would trigger the greater emotional response within me.  For example, if I heard the loud noise of a monster, while also witnessing the image of the monster out of nowhere, that would trigger the greater fear response within me than simply hearing, or looking at the monster. 

Another example would be that witnessing a female character, witnessing her actions, knowing her story/personality, hearing her theme song, and hearing her voice would trigger the greater feeling of beauty, or love, within me than simply witnessing the image of this female character.  So, it's when different forms of art combine that create the greater work of art, and the greater, more profound, emotional response. 

For example, the Legend of Zelda and Super Mario are great games.  They combine imagery, sound, and good story telling.  If it was just the story, sound, music, or imagery, then that wouldn't be as great as the video games themselves which combine all those forms of art.  It just wouldn't trigger as powerful of an emotional response within the audience. 

I'm not saying I wish to pursue multiple fields of art to create video games or movies, which combine multiple forms of art.  I just wish to pursue one field of art, and stick with it.  That would be composing.  I have no interest in any other field of art anyway.  Now, I realize all fields of art are equal, and no one is inferior to the other.  But, for me, composing is what I want to do. 

Other Person's Response:  If you were to ask people if they'd prefer to listen to awesome music, or to instead look at awesome paintings, and read beautiful stories, I bet many people would prefer to listen to music.  They'd prefer to just crank up their speakers, and groove to the music.  That shows many people are more moved and motivated by music than any other art form.  So, I understand why you want to make music, rather than painting, or writing stories.

My Reply:  Yes.  For me, music evokes the more profound and powerful emotion than any other art form. 

Other Person's Response:  Even though music triggers the more powerful and profound emotion than any other art form for you, do other works of art still trigger powerful and profound emotions for you?

My Reply:  Yes.

Other Person's Response:  If you ever do compose some awesome music that expresses what you want to express to the audience, you can combine your music with Sonic the Hedgehog videos, or any other type of video you see your music fitting to.  That would certainly create a greater work of art than having the music alone.

My Reply:  That's what I plan on doing.  Also, take note that, even though I'd use Sonic the Hedgehog video clips, my music wouldn't suit the Sonic universe.  My music would be very powerful, evil, bizarre, otherworldly, and awesome.  So, I'd be expressing Sonic in my own, unique way.  I'd also use Dragon Ball Z, or Dragon Ball Super video clips as well for my awesome music.  That is, if I ever do create such awesome music someday.

Other Person's Response:  I see you're someone who wishes to express emotion through music, and you're not someone intellectual, such as a person who'd want to play chess, or learn physics.

My Reply:  Correct.  Even though I'm not an intellectual genius like Einstein, or an amazing chess player, I'd consider myself to be an emotional genius.  My fully crafted music wouldn't be great like Beethoven's or Bach's music.  But, I'd still consider it to be the work of an emotional genius who expresses powerful and profound emotion.  You don't have to be the best composer in the world to be considered a genius.  For example, I consider Koji Kondo to be a genius, since he makes music that so many people love and find catchy.

Other Person's Response:  You do realize there's some intellect involved when it comes to making music, and that it's not all emotional?  For example, you have to take into account the rules of music theory, and things like this.

My Reply:  I realize this.  But, I'm not willing to pursue intellectual endeavors for their own sake, such as playing chess, doing riddles, calculus, or any other intellectual exercise.

Other Person's Response:  When you say you wish to create awesome, memorable music to share to the world, are you wanting to give to the world?

My Reply:  It's a matter of wanting to showcase, rather than a situation like wanting to give money to the poor, or wanting to help humanity.  Basically, I just wish to show off something great and awesome.  That is, if I ever do create such awesome music someday.

Other Person's Response:  If you can never create the music you want to create, then why not just make AMVs (anime music videos)?  You can take music that already exists, and add it to video clips.

My Reply:  I don't want to do that. 

Other Person's Response:  When something is sung such as:  "Tyler, Tyler, he's our man!  If he can't do it, nobody can!," wouldn't that be the chorus part of a song?

My Reply:  Yes.  Many of my melodies are the chorus part of a song.  The chorus would be the most emotionally intense part of the song.

Other Person's Response:  I realize those naturally inspired melodies in your head do adhere to a scale, and aren't just randomly chosen notes.  But, that's not enough in order for a melody to be meaningful, great, and conveying of certain scenes to listeners.  So, even if you do fully craft your melodies, and give context to them, they'd still be rubbish, even though they do adhere to a scale.  The fact is, your melodies are lacking in other attributes necessary to make them great and meaningful.  You claim the chosen notes and rests of your short melodies make them great and memorable, just like those short tunes, such as the McDonald's I'm Lovin' It tune. 

You're wrong.  It takes a well-trained, and well-educated composer to create great and memorable melodies like this.  It can't be done through naturally creating tunes in your head through inspiration.  It doesn't matter how powerful the inspiration is because no amount of inspiration can trump training and education.  Can a martial artist become a fighting master just through his inspiration and passion alone?  No!  He needs to be trained and educated in martial arts to come up with some good moves.  He can't expect to come up with some awesome moves in his mind if he doesn't know martial arts.  If he does come up with moves, then they'd just be rubbish moves.

My Reply:  I think I just need to revise these melodies, so they match up with the great ones in my head.

Other Person's Response:  Speaking of your best dark tune, I do see a pattern in terms of the notes.  For this tune, you use the notes G, C, Ab, Eb, and F.  C, Eb, and G is the C chord in F minor, and the notes F and Ab would be the notes of an F chord in F minor.  The C chord would be the dominant chord in F minor, while the F chord would be the tonic chord in F minor.  A dominant chord going to the tonic chord, or a tonic chord going to a dominant chord, would be a perfect or imperfect cadence. 

My Reply:  Thanks for pointing that out!  I find it quite interesting how my naturally inspired melodies end up having a pattern to them.  All of my melodies might not have a pattern to them though. 

Other Person's Response:  Haven't you ever come up with an idea in your head that you thought was good, only to find out it makes no sense, and just doesn't work out?  My point is, you might be coming up with melodies in your head that you think are awesome, memorable, and expressing of certain scenes.  But, perhaps later on you'll find out that was never true.  You might find out that they really were rubbish melodies.

My Reply:  Yes, that did happen to me.  I did come up with certain ideas for video games that I thought were good, only to find out they don't work out.  I shared my ideas to video game fans on forums, and they told me why my ideas are no good.  But, I'm not sure if the same thing applies to the melodies I'm creating in my head.  This might be a different situation. 

Other Person's Response:  I bet your ideas for video games were good, and people were just bashing them.

My Reply:  If I was someone working for Nintendo or Sega, the Nintendo or Sega team would also tell me my ideas are bad, make no sense, and don't work out.  I don't think a single person there would tell me my ideas are good.  If I listen to people who are experienced professionals, rather than blindly accepting the opinions of people, such as you and my mother, I'll get the real truth. 

Other Person's Response:  You say the Nintendo or Sega team would be telling the truth if they told you your ideas are no good.  I thought you couldn't decide what's true though.

My Reply:  I don't think it would be a situation where the Nintendo or Sega team would debate whether my ideas would be good or not.  They'd all tell me they're no good.  Besides, these are the creators of famous video games, such as Sonic the Hedgehog, and Super Mario.  So, they know what's best for these games.

Other Person's Response:  There are fans who think the Nintendo or Sega team are doing things all wrong.  For example, Sega fans would say the recent Sonic games suck.  The fans preferred Sonic back in the old days.  That means there are fans who disagree with the ideas put forth by Nintendo or Sega.  Likewise, there are ideas put forth by fans that Nintendo or Sega disagrees with.  Even if these are experienced, hardcore fans, there will still be a disagreement between their ideas, and the ideas put forth by Sega or Nintendo.  They'd find themselves in a debate, where the ideas would be debated.  So, even your ideas would be put to debate.

My Reply:  In which case, I really wouldn't know then if my ideas are good or not, given that they'd be debated.

Other Person's Response:  If you realize that your mentally inspired melodies really were rubbish all along, would you still hear them as great, and conveying of those scenes you described?  Or, would you now hear them as the meaningless rubbish that they really are?

My Reply:  It's quite possible I'd still hear them as great and conveying of those scenes.  Let me give you an example to illustrate my point.  If Jake was nice and harmless, and Jon thought he was cruel and harmful, then if Jon later learned that Jake really was nice and harmless, then Jon might still feel that he's cruel and harmful anyway.  Jon might still get that same vibe from Jake.  My point is, certain thoughts or feelings can still linger on, even though we realize the truth.  Another example would be phobias.  People know the truth that there's no reason to fear.  But, they still fear anyway.

Other Person's Response:  Let's pretend you successfully conveyed your melodies to other listeners, and there were experienced musicians debating whether your melodies are meaningless rubbish, or if they're awesome, then you're saying you'd have to remain undecided on this? 

My Reply:  Yes.  I wouldn't know if my melodies are meaningless rubbish or not.  That even applies to my melodies as they are now, in their beginning stage of development.  If people debate whether my melodies will be great, or if they'd be rubbish once they become successfully conveyed, I'd have to remain undecided on this as well.

Other Person's Response:  If your melodies really were great, and did follow all the rules of composing, then people would be hearing them as great.  If a melody truly is great, then it should sound great on its own.  Thus, there'd be no need for anything more than the melody itself for others to listen to.  But, having more would further bring out the melody's power and greatness.  The reason why your melodies convey no power and greatness whatsoever to others is because that's what they really are.  They're just rubbish melodies.

My Reply:  Even if you do create a melody that's great, and follows all the rules of composing, the melody alone might still sound like a tune, plucked out by a baby.  So, I really do think more things are needed to bring out the power and greatness I see in my melodies, such as the proper chords, harmony, etc.  Also, a person could create a melody that follows all the rules of composing, successfully convey that melody to the audience by adding in all the proper chords, harmony, etc., and the melody having the context of an entire song, but it still sounding like a meaningless melody, plucked out by a baby.  

That's because something more is required to make a melody great or meaningful, other than having a melody that's successfully conveyed, skillfully follows all the rules of composing, and has the context of an entire song that's also successfully conveyed, and skillfully follows all the rules of composing.  It must be a melody that actually expresses something great or meaningful.  That means it must be a melody inspired from within.  It must be inspired by the power, greatness, and meaning within yourself. 

The same idea applies to creating a song that's also great or meaningful.  So, following the rules when it comes to creating artwork doesn't make a great, memorable, or meaningful work of art.  Rules are there just to assist you.  They help you create a great or meaningful work of art.  But, it really all comes down to inspiration.  Once you've been inspired to come up with a great, meaningful work of art in your head, the rules would be there to help you convey your awesome vision to the audience.

Other Person's Response:  If you created any melody, or theme, that follows all the rules of music theory, and said melody, or theme, has been successfully conveyed to the audience, you're saying it might still sound like senseless rubbish, plucked out by a baby?  You're saying it's inspiration that creates the awesome, sensible melodies and themes, while the rules are simply there to help you convey said melodies and themes to the audience?

My Reply:  Yes.  You can have an awesome, sensible melody, or theme, that follows all the rules of music theory.  But, it's possible to have a senseless, rubbish melody, or theme, that also follows all the rules of music theory.  So, it's inspiration and talent that determines if you create some awesome, sensible melodies and themes, or not.  The rules are just there to assist you, and help you make necessary revisions.

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